Reserved for CXC. Don't use without my permission.
Hanamaru Youchien 35
//sd: side dialog, cd: corner dialog
p1
Tsuchida: At last, this saturday is the visit day
Tsuchida: Let's work hard to draw the family drawings that will decorate the classroom
1st panel kids' sd: Wai wai wai
Anzu: Anzu will draw papa and mama
Koume: Will Onii-chan like this?
Anzu: Hii-chan, who are you drawing?
Hii: Papa...
Hii: When I drew mama last time he told me to draw papa next time...
Title: Hanamaru Visit Day
p2
Anzu's sd: Alright, I'll draw!
Girl's sd: Hey hey, did you watch yesterday's panda cat?
Anzu: I did!
Koume: It was funny
Girl's sd: Panda cat did...
Anzu's sd: That moment he--
Koume: Right
All girls' big sd: Papa papa panda cat
All girls' little sd: Kyah kyah
Tsuchida(thinks): Today's Hiiragi is a little different (cd: She's ignoring panda cat)
Hii: I should do spattering here...
Hii: Here some yellow Acrylic Gouache to make it more vivid...
Tsuchida's sd: Hiiragi you're cool!
Kenji: Hello master! //shishou
Anzu: (cd: Ah) Kenji and
Yuu's sd: Hello
Koume: Yuu-kun <3
Koume's sd: Wah <3
p3
Kenji: I finished reading master's father's book and I came to return it
Kenji: The cosmology as your father explains it was really interesting
Hii: Really...?
Kenji's sd: The Stellar Theory one...//I'm not so sure of this one, this and the next 2 dialogs were really blurry, but this was the only one I couldn't make any sense of...
Kenji's sd: Astrophysics...
Hii's sd: The quantum gravity...
Both's sd: Kyah kyah
Anzu: What are they talking about?
Tsuchida: Even I don't understand
Kenji: And your father's book has overflowing romance, it made me want to go to the space!
Hii's sd: Eh
Kenji: I've become your father's fan!
Kenji: Master!!
Tsuchida: The drawing! The drawing!!
Tsuchida's sd: Waaah
Hii: Dad's drawing
Hii's sd: Ooh
Kenji's sd: Sorry...
Kenji: ...Your fathers drawing?
Koume: You see, I'm drawing for the visit day
Koume's sd: Koume is drawing Onii-chan
Yuu: It's well done
p4
Kenji: Is that so?
Kenji: I hope your dad likes it!
Hii: ...Yeah...
SFX: *Knock knock*
Hii: Excuse me...
SFX: *clatter*
Hii: Emm papa...
Hii's dad: I was searching for an old paper when an avalanche ocurred
Hii's dad's sd: You saved me!
Hii's dad: So, Hii had some business with papa?
p5
Hii: ...Umm...emm... It's that this saturday...
Hii's dad: (cd: Ah) Papa also had something to tell you!
Hii's dad: Papa's got a chance to talk with Professor Bawking! //A parody of Stephen Hawking
Hii: The world famous cosmology researcher...!?
Hii: Papa you're amazing... When are you meeting the professor...?
Hii's sd: Congratulations...
Hii's dad's sd: Thanks!
Hii's dad: Emmm
Hii's dad: This Saturday
Hii's dad: I wanted to meet the professor personally once
Hii's dad: I'm really looking forward to it!
Hii's dad: (cd: And) Right now I told you my part
Hii's dad: What did you want to tell me?
Hii: ...No, It's nothing...
p6
Box: The next day
Voice: Bye bye
Voice: See you tomorrow
Anzu: Hii-chan, you aren't going home yet?
Hii: Yea... I'll stay a bit more and complete papa's drawing...
Anzu: I see! You're really looking forward for your papa to see it!
Hii: Papa can't come because he has work to do...
Anzu/Koume: Eh
Anzu?: B,But
Hii: I can show him the drawing home...
Hii: And, Hiiragi likes how papa looks when he's working...
Hii: So it's ok
Koume: But she drew it with all her effort...
p7
Kenji: ---Hey!
Anzu?: Kenji?
SFX: *Ding dong*
Hii's dad: Ah
Koume's sd: It's Hii-chan's papa
Anzu's sd: Hello!
Hii's dad: Anzu-chan, Koume-chan and...?
Kenji: Nice to meet you! I'm master's...Hiiragi-san's friend Kenji!
Hii's dad: Hello and nice to meet you!
Hii's dad: Hiiragi hasn't come back...
Anzu's sd: No
Anzu: We came to see Hii-chan's papa today!
p8
Koume: Y,You see
Koume: The Kindergarten's visit day is this saturday
Hii's dad: (cd: Eh) Hiiragi didn't say a word about that...
Kenji: It seems she didn't want to tell you because she didn't want to trouble you
Koume: Hii-chan did her best to draw her papa
Anzu: Hii-chan won't say it but she probably wants her papa to come!
Kenji: So...emmm...can't you come to the visit day?
p9
Koume's bro's sd: Thank you Koume <3
Koume's sd: Kyaah
Anzu's sd: This is papa and this is mama, Anzu is here!
Anzu's dad's sd: It's a brilliant and energetic drawing
Sakura's sd: It's well done <3
Sakura: (cd:Oh) Hii-chan's drawing is lovely!
Sakura: Is it your dad?
Hii: Yes...!
Sakura: That means that he's coming today?
Sakura: He'll be glad when he sees this!
Hii: ...No
Hii: He has some work today...
p10
Hii's dad: Hello! I'm Hii's papa
SFX: *pat*
Hii's dad: Which one is Hii's drawing---...
Hii's dad: Ah! It's this one that has a lot of stars right!
Hii's dad: As I thought Hii's good drawing
Hii's dad: Thank you for drawing papa!
p11
Hii: Papa...Why...Your job...
Hii's dad: I took the day off
Hii's dad: //I'll divide this in 4 lines
When I explained the reasons he gave me his consent
It's ok, It's ok, Go to the visit day
We'll meet again some other time (star)
He's a good person!
sd: America Nice //maybe "nice american"? this is written in katakanized english so i'm not so sure how to put it
Hii's dad: Papa loves his job but
Hii's dad: I love Hii a lo----t more!
Hii: ...Papa, Thank you
SFX: *hugs*
Hii: for coming...
p12
Hii's dad: If you want to thank someone...
Hii: !
Koume: Ah
Anzu: Emm...
Kenji: Ermm
Hii: Thank you, everyone...
Sign below the drawing: Dad Hiiragi
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