One Piece 399

Alrighty folks, here's my 399 translation in it's current form, 8 pages done. Any critiques or comments would help.

EDIT: Completed, 2/17.

One Piece Chapter 399 Translation

Chapter Title: “Fly Towards the Waterfall!”

Ministory Chapter Title: Miss Goldenweek’s Plan Name ”Meet Baroque” Volume 31: “LONG TIME! (The Old Lady’s ‘Long Time No See’) And the first meeting with ‘Big Sister’”

Page 1-2:
Panel 2:
Spandam: You think you can live on
Spandam: after making enemies of the whole world?

Voice: THE DRAW BRIDGE IS LOWERING!

Luffy: OF COURSE I DO!!

Panel 4:
Chopper: ROBIN!

Usopp: WE’LL MOST DEFINITELY SAVE YOU!

Panel 5:
Califa: Heheheh… They seem pretty strong.

Jabura: GAHAHAHAA!! They’re not even scared of the flag.

Kaku: But it’s useless to try and match up with us.

Page 3:
Panel 1:
Box: Courthouse’s Front Plaza

Panel 2:
Box: Left Hand Tower (Mozu and Lulu)

Panel 3:
Mozu: YES! WE DID IT!

Lulu?: ALL RIGHT! WE PULLED THE LEVER!

Panel 4:
Box: Right Hand Tower (Kiwi and Tilestone)

Panel 5:
Kiwi: Looks like things went well for Mozu and crew too!

Tilestone?: THE DRAWBRIDGE IS LOWERING!
Tilestone?: GOOOOOO, STRAW HAT!

Page 4:
Panel 1:
Baskerville: YOU BASTARD PIRATES!

Baskerville: THERE’S NO WAY WE’LL LET YOU DO THAT!

Panel 2:
Baskerville: PREPARE THE MORTARS!

Baskerville: I DON’T CARE IF YOU DESTROY IT, JUST STOP THAT DRAWBRIDGE!

Panel 3:
Paulie: Not a chance, bud!

Paulie: “PIPE HITCH KNIVES!”

Panel 4:
Zambai: IT’S THE END FOR YOU!

Zambai: “DISMEMBERING SLICE!”

Page 5:
Panel 1:
Baskerville: GAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!

Panel 2:
Marine: JUSTICE BASKERVILLE!

Panel 3:
“Princess” Baskerville: Heheheh…

Panel 4:
“Princess” Baskerville: TOO BAD! TURNS OUT WE’RE A TRIO OF JUSTICES!

Bas: The true name of the left is “Bas!”

Kerville: The true name of the right is “Kerville!”

Panel 5:
“Princess”: And therefore! I, the center,
“Princess”: Am the Princess!

Bas and Kerville: WHAT PRINCESS?!

Zambai and Paulie: SO YOU’RE JUST THREE PEOPLE?!? THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THAT FOR!?

Page 6:
Panel 1:
Baskerville: WE’RE CHUMS!

Paulie: SHUT IT!

Panel 2:
Baskerville: FIRE THE MORTARS!

Panel 4:
Sanji: THE DRAWBRIDGE STOPPED!

Panel 5:
“Princess”: CHIEF SPANDAM! FLEE FROM THE JUSTICE ADMINISTRATION TOWER!

Panel 6:
Luffy: DON’T GET IN THE WAY!

Luffy: Dammit, who is that!??!?!

Panel 7:
Spandam: Huff… Puff…

Spandam: Al-alright! Good work!

Spandam: Let’s get to the Gate of Justice before they can make it over!

Page 7:
Panel 1:
Spandam: COME! NICO ROBIN!!

Robin: AH!

Spandam: SOMEONE ELSE, TAKE CUTTY FLAM!

Panel 2:
Chopper: ROBIN!

Panel 3:
Spandam: Heh… You pirates don’t have a prayer!
Spandam: We got the Assassination Team CP9 here!

Sanji: ROBIN-CHAN!

Spandam: The girl who lived on the Island which sought to revive the ancient weapons, Nico Robin…

Panel 4:
Spandam: And the man who has the blueprints for that weapon, Cutty Flam…

Panel 5:
Spandam: WE MUST TAKE THIS GLORIOUS CHANCE BEFORE IT RUNS AWAY RIGHT BEFORE OUR VERY EYES!

Panel 6:
Spandam: !!?
Spandam: GRRR! CUTTY FLAM!!

Page 8:
Panel 1:
Spandam: EH?

Panel 5:
Spandam: IS THAT…
Spandam: IT CAN’T BE!!!

Spandam: THE BLUEPRINTS FOR THE ANCIENT WEAPON PLUTON?!

Panel 6:
Franky: It’s the real deal.

Franky: Can ya believe it?

Panel 7:
Franky: Lucci… Kaku… you both should know too, right?

Panel 8:
Kaku: I can’t believe it… you bastard…

Kaku: You were keeping it inside your body this whole time?

Page 9:
Panel 1:
Spandam: The… THE REAL THING?!
Spandam: It’s the real thing? HAND IT OVER!

Panel 2:
Spandam: HAND IT OVER TO ME! HAND OVER THE BLUEPRINTS I’VE ALWAYS WANTED!

Franky: Nico Robin.

Panel 3:
Franky: There are rumors all around the world that you wished to abuse the power of the weapons.
Franky: But I know you’re not a demon.

Franky: …Nothing…
Franky: that the shipwrights of Water Seven inherited over generations
Franky: was the skills to “create weapons!!!”

Panel 5:
Iceberg: These are the blueprints that our great Master Tom

Iceberg: sacrificed his future just so that they would still exist.

Panel 6:
Iceberg: But the mere existence of a woman
Iceberg: called Nico Robin, there is at least a risk that the weapons would be revived.

Iceberg: That is why it is imperative
Iceberg: that this world has the power to fight back.

Panel 7:
Franky: Hey, Spanda…

Spandam: HURRY UP AND GIMME!

Franky: Master Tom and Iceberg staked their lives on protecting these sheets of paper.

Page 10:
Panel 1:
Franky: But! If the ancient weapons fell into the hands of an utter moron like you
Franky: and things started getting violent… Another weapon would be born.

Franky: One that would STOP your running around unchecked, as was the wishes of the first weapon’s designer!

Panel 2:
Franky: …!! Should Nico Robin use it, then surely you’d be able to awaken the weapon! She’s a dangerous woman!

Franky: But those are the true friends that are defending her!

Panel 3:
Franky: So, I’d like to take a gamble here.

Panel 4:
Franky: I bet there’s only one way for me to

Franky: fulfill the wishes of the designer right now.

Panel 5:
Spandam: I’M GETTING TIRED OF YOUR YAMMERING! HAND IT OVER!

Spandam: THAT THERE IS MINE!

Page 11:
Panel 1:
Spandam: AH!

Panel 2:
Spandam: GARRRRRRGH!!!

Spandam: BASTARD! WHAT ARE YOU DOIN’?!?!
Spandam: Ahhh…

Panel 3:
Spandam: DAMMIT, I’M GONNA KILL YOU!

Califa: The mission we spent 5 years on…

Panel 6-7:
Franky: The blueprints I carried for the purpose of creating the power to fight back…

Panel 8:
Franky: that your government tried to take…!! Originally, I was just supposed to keep it unknown from the rest of the world…

Franky: but should the time come that it sees the light of day, it must be destroyed!

Page 12:
Panel 1:
Franky: But now, the power that opposes the weapons has been lost!

Franky: And if Nico Robin were to slip through your fingers, you’d be hopeless!

Franky: SO IF THE STRAW HATS WIN YOU’LL HAVE NOTHING LEFT!!
Franky: SO I’M BETTING EVERYTHING ON THEIR VICTORY!!

Panel 2:
Spandam: Make a fool of me, will you… I’ll END you, here and now!

Panel 3:
Zambai: BROOOOOO!!!!

Panel 4:
Zambai: BROTHER FRANKY!!!

Panel 5:
FF: Hey, Bro’s at the tower of the justice administration!

SS: WHEE! BROTHER!!!

FF: WHAT A RELIEF!

Panel 6:
SS: BROTHER, WE CAME TO SAVE YOU!

FF: WE CAME WITH MR. STRAW HAT’S GROUP!

FF: SODOM AND GOMORRAH WORKED ALSO WORKED HARD!

FF: COME BACK TO US, BROTHER!

FF: ARE YOU HURT AT ALL?

Panel 7:
Franky: You…

Franky: you guys…

Page 13:
Panel 1:
Franky: YOU GUYS CAME ALL THIS WAY TO SAVE ME?! …YOU CAME…

Franky: AH GNEW AH COULB COUND ON YOUB!! (I knew I could count on you!!)

Panel 2:
FF: BROTHERRRRRRR!!

Franky: Idiots…
Franky: For me…

Franky: I’m not crying…

Panel 3:
Luffy: SHUT IT, ALL OF YOU!

Nami and Zoro: BWAH! LIKE A DEMON!?

Panel 4:
Luffy: ROBIN’S WAITING! HURRY IT UP WITH THE BRIDGE!

Zoro: OH YEAH! HURRY IT UP, YA BASTARDS!

Nami: YEAH! GET YOUR BUTTS IN GEAR OR I’LL KICK ‘EM!

Sanji: I ALSO LIKE THE UNRELENTING NAMI-SAN!

Zambai: Oh yeah, huh…

Panel 5:
Franky: STRAW HAT!!

Page 14:
Panel 1:
Franky: You looked after my precious subordinates…
Franky: NOW LET ME SHOW YOU THE SUPER BATTLE POWER OF THEIR LEADER, THE GREAT FRANKY!

Panel 2:
Luffy: DO AS YOU PLEASE!

Luffy: I STILL HAVEN’T FORGIVEN YOU OVER USOPP, THOUGH!

Franky: Nope, still to the side…

Panel 3:
Spandam: Cutty Flam… Give back…

Panel 4:
Spandam: MY BLUEPRINTS!

Panel 5:
Franky: Eh?

Panel 6:
FF: WAAAAAAAH! BROTHER!

Franky: WHOAAA!

Panel 7:
Zambai: BROTHER IS

Zambai: FALLING INTO THE WATERFALL!

Panel 8:
Usopp: WHOA, FRANKY!

Kokoro: HEY, PIRATES!

Nami: Eh? MISS KOKORO!?

Kokoro: Listen to everything I have to say!

Panel 9:
Kokoro: Enough with your hesitation!

Nami: Hesitation… but the bridge is only halfway down!

Page 15:
Panel 1:
Kokoro: Halfway down is good enough! I’ll get there in 4 seconds!

Kokoro: I’m gonna fly through the waterfall!

Person: GAAAAAAH!

Panel 2:
Luffy: WAS THAT THE OLD HAG? WHAT’S SHE TALKING ABOUT?!

Nami: I’m not quite sure…

Panel 3:
Marines: GAH! Something’s coming into the courthouse-

Marines: A SEA-TRAIN?!?

Panel 4:
Nami: Fly through…

Nami: … the waterfall…

Panel 5:
SFX: CHOOOO CHOOOO

Luffy: The Sea Trains Whistle!

Panel 6:
Baskerville: Hey, what’s that?

Marine: JUSTICE, PLEASE ESCAPE!

Baskerville: WHAT IS THIS TRAIN-

Panel 7:
Baskerville: IT’S NOT STOPPING?!?

Page 16:
Panel 1:
Chopper: WAAAAAAH!

Nami: Eh?

Luffy: LET’S GO!

Panel 2:
Straw Hats: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

Panel 4:
Kokoro: IT CAN STILL RUN! ROCKETMAN IS FROM THE LEGENDARY SHIPBUILDER COMPANY!

Kokoro: DON’T UNDERESTIMATE TOMS WORKERS!

Panel 6:
Franky: ….!!! ROCKETMAN?!?

Page 17-18:
Panel 2:
Franky: OOPH!

Panel 3:
Straw Hats: WAAAAH!!!

Panel 4:
FF: IT FLEW!

Panel 5:
Spandam: They’re… THEY’RE COMING!!!