Recent content by CallMeZionn

His arms are behind the chair

Here is a picture of Death, I colored this one so feel free to say where i went wrong Here is a picture of Raiden (Main Character): http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45097 Here is a link to my storyline: http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45061 [/IMG]

Yah, thats him, I'm planning on doing a picture of Death soon.

hmm... I know this needs quite a bit of work, but I was wondering if you could give me a few honest comments on what is good and what is bad, feel free to say anything you want. Thx. BTW, here is a link for my storyline. http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45061 [/IMG]

Thx

Well, after a while he will slowly gain some of deaths abilitys, although he resents the fact of being a death god, Death says that he will inevitably become his successor and that he will need to be as powerful as him do do the job right.

The "sceptical" and "Believer" friends is a good idea, and well i am not going to make another death character but i will include other daemons and probably deaths "higher ups" to scold him when his job fails thanks to Rai.

I have thought of giving him friends, I just havnt thought them out yet. And I really like like the idea of Rai having to stop death from harming innocent bystanders, Thanks for you're comment.

Ok, what I am about to type is a brief discription of a story for a manga I would like to create, If possible give you're honest opinion, do not hold back, force youuselves to find flaws and tell me. Now with that said here I go. The story is about a boy 16 year old boy named Hiroshi Raiden...

no, to tell you the truth, its just a picture of a character, i might turn it into the title page but i am not sure yet, anyway thx for those tips. :)

Here are pictures of another character in my upcoming comik, enjoy. [/IMG] [/IMG]

Thanks for the tips, the character does look bright, but thats because when i originally drew this it was not supposed to be in a dark area and i just added the black backround later on, I am going to end up fixing it i just dont know when. Thanks again, CallMeZionn

Here you go, tell me what you think about it, anything is fine :) [/IMG]

Here is a picture of some of the Characters in my upcoming manga, enjoy. http://s378.photobucket.com/albums/oo228/CallMeZionn/?action=view&current=Numriser.jpg