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He just needed to draft and arrange he arcs well. Agree with you, he had a very solid start but once he thought of making the twist of siding Selene with humans was the mistake. That came too early. Labyrinth followed up well that it started to feel like the penultimate arc. Gold Owl was where...

This spin off is giving me potential like it will give Mira the glory she deserves!!!!

Cute little flashback scene but still not enough substance! That line of Erza mocking MG for using her offsprings as shield was a good plotline to mirror the whole motherhood topic with Irene! Again, feels pretty meh considering how Erza had 0 interaction with Irene within this spinoff.

I have always felt, including Irene in this series was such a good idea for her redemption. When she first got introduced, my vision was that she became a mother figure both Wendy and Erza. Seeing Wendy as the daughter her old self wished to have, yet also cherishing the biological daughter she...

Beautiful power up but placed at such a strange moment, and the build up was so abrupt. I'd prefer a bit more interaction or history between the two instead of just, "We mated," followed by a very dull reaction towards Kurugi's death. Maybe, some sort of connection of the moon and water, or...

I wouldn't appreciate if they suddenly show Yukino could summon DGs too. Just as Lucy said, she had to practise hard for her growth, while Yukino, who hasn't even shown what she could with Ophiucus, could attain SD. As for Merc, I hope this isn't like CSK's appearance. I'd like to believe it's...

Why is this Selene reaction giving me vibes like she might her key to Lucy too some time later? Like she's shocked, and leaning towards impressed..?

Still feels like there could have been other ways to write this out. Juvia has been shown to use other medium to channel her magic. I wish that when she learned she can channel her magic power onto the chains, she could do a "takeover" of Anchor's water? Or merge into his water? Like she became...

This chapter pretty much just feels pointless to me. Juvia's instant revival before Gray even had a chance to go berserk? Or at least, respond in some kind of way? I do, however, like that she used Water Lock. Ever since Mashima introduced her Water Slicer, the latter seems to be her default...

I don't see anyone else coming to assist against Earth Build because there's already Wendy and Natsu there, along with Lucy's new ability to summon Merc. 3 dragon level allies. Even though Natsu is out at the moment, this is Hiro's pet character we're talking about. We just need Lucy to be in...

Can anyone remind me again what is Faris's goal in all of this? Just to carry on the destructive will of Acno? Because I feel like her entire emergence just made things so unnecessarily messy. Her plot should have been like just a carrier of Acno's arm, pretending she sides with the dragons, and...

This.. this looks like decent progress. Natsu's design also is a step up. Personally I feel like this progression should have been what the chapters were like maybe since half a year ago. And Natsu initiates battle with Ignia and BFaris early, while the rest of the parties (dragons vs humans vs...

We shouldn't have lost Irene so early. W Faris should still be involved behind the scenes. Selene should have stuck as a villain. We didn't need Fire & Flame - early Diabolos were better antagonists, Ignia could have been the one to take over the guild and lead those power hungry Dragon Slayers...

All these weeks waiting for chapters, albeit with barely any plot progression, only for them to be compressed into one episode later on in the anime.. Can I just say, I kinda wished Irene would still be in this world, just so for her to witness how insane F&F is glorifying Dragonisation, when...

He had the chance to emulate their joint attack against Hades, one of the top scenes IMO