Well I would first suggest working on the ending first with any mystery style story the ending Is imperative second it would be the villain with a a demon being a good guy I would presume that the main villains wouldn't be the demon world unless this demon is different from the rest personally I...
Re: Looking for a few things
Dude respect the idea especially since it looks like you put a lot of work into it I would suggest maybe simplifying it a bit if not then you might need at least 2 writers (unless you are one of them) If you need ideas for it I would suggest checking out the ebook...
Hello I'm rave and this is my first post on this site I have recently started writing a story a bout a group of death row inmates each with a different style of murder and are put on a secluded island as test subjects for a surgery that will give these inmates abilities similar to their killing...
