it's okay... but i suggest revisions of the eyes.
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also, i'm trying to draw a character same to your jen. i'll post it the next time.
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i'll email you with some sample artwork.
sir, i want to apply as an artist... though i'm not really good at it, i want to try your series. it's an interesting story for me. please pm or email me at this address:
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