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The act of merging with the target is likely what happened the first time Elfman used his "Beast" form—the incident that led to Lisanna’s death. In the flashback, he appears enormous, whereas when he uses the form again during the *Phantom Pain* arc, he is significantly smaller. It stands to...

What "mature" moment? The kiss? Wow, what a truly "mature" moment—(forced laugh). I certainly hope this same level of maturity applies to other couples too—HUH, RIGHT?! If you’re aware that your readers are adults now, it would be great to reflect that in your stories, instead of churning out...

That’s a really great cover page featuring Lucy. Levia is a joke—"I won't fight in dragon form, just to give you a chance, because I enjoy fighting"—and then the very next chapter: "Filthy human!" *Bim*, he transforms into a dragon. It’s just like Dogramag telling Natsu he wouldn't kill him...

You're out on a plain, yet you didn't hear or see the huge dragon showing up? A bunch of deaf idiots—and you, Happy, you're flying around; didn't *you* see it? Cobra giving the warning way too late—what a joke. They wanted to back Lucy up, but nope—Lucy is handling things just fine on her own...

Laxus looks really weird on the cover—nothing like how he looks in the chapter itself. What is that pretentious line from Lucy? That sounds more like something Evergreen would say. Jellal getting on stage to dance with Erza—oh my! (Though, let's not forget he's still a wanted man at this point...

Obviously, Ivan betrays Eraser; he just wanted to get rid of a rival. Ivan tries to play the "father figure" card, claiming he put him in that room to prevent a collapse—never mind the others. Did they really think the rest of the guild wouldn't show up to help Laxus? Eraser gets one-shotted...

Natsu being able to recharge infinitely inside the sun is really handy. And if he can eat the flames—bam—he just makes them vanish. Laxus had his soul stolen but just said "NO"—he simply bounced back, got a boost from Wendy, and returned to the fight. Why were there images of Makarov, Mira...

A bit of Laxus—wearing Makarov's outfit; you're wearing this suit, so don't ask questions. The monsters show up, and the only lightning user isn't on Laxus's side—what a joke. Natsu hitting Lucy and Happy is nothing surprising; Natsu snapping his neck out of joint to dodge an attack.

Nothing special—they all get one-shotted. So Ivan created this white lacrima—to what end? An equivalent to a Lumen?

A little father-son chat—so, did Laxus's mother die or not? Mira joins the group; no need to hide—you could have come over too. Ivan wants Fairy Tail—that hasn't changed—but what does he plan to do with it?

It’s cute seeing Erza sewing clothes for Eileen—so they aren't magical garments, just a regular outfit—and Eileen is touched by the gesture. But once again, it’s a missed opportunity; there should have been a mother-daughter conversation instead of just getting rid of Eileen. Even with that...

So, Ivan's back, wanting the guild, and in exchange, he'll give us the White Lacrima? Lumen? (Spoiler alert: he won't do it.) Will we see the other Raven Tail members again? Will we see more of Laxus's mother, a flashback to Laxus as a child receiving his lacrima, or a backstory on Ivan and why...

Elsefira is there, that's good..... BUT SHE OR ATHENA? !!!!! The whole guild comes back with the power of DS, thank you Mest, elfman who teleported alone on the other hand, hello error. ''''Venerable elder''' uh you're older than makarof, elséfira tssss. An official request yeah because where...

So eraser was on the council but he must not have had a high position, since Jellal doesn't seem to recognize him. Erza sensed her man in danger and rushed in at full speed. So there are 4 bad guys and they are fixating on Laxus. The monsters were humans, so when eraser erases them they...

So, according to the space, this takes place during the three months after the Games; it’s a bit ridiculous and inconsistent—especially with Mest involved—since it would have been simpler to set it during the year following the war, but oh well. Lucy getting humiliated for no reason again...