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Thanks! How does this sound? In moments of sentience My impure desires are exposed The excitement from that day is still ringing I think I struggle with balancing fluency and fidelity. Do you think translating it this way diminishes from the Japanese feeling?

Hi! I need help with a couple of lines from some lyrics 研ぎ澄まされた　時間の中で 淫らな欲望を晒す あの日の鼓動が　鳴り止まない I think I'm having the most trouble with the first line. From what I've looked up, 研ぎ澄ます is used mostly in the context of sharpening a blade or sharpening your senses. I can't figure out how...

thanks for your input! translating visual kei interviews is so hard. They tend to speak strangely lol ><;;

sentence: いかにそこに一体筋があるのかを自分たちでも確認して納得したいというか is there a difference between 筋がある and 筋がいい? I know 筋がいい means to be good at something. Also, I'm not really sure how to translate いかに. There seem to be a few meanings, and I'm not sure which one fits the best in this sentence >< here's...

thank's so much!! trying to translate that was killing me @_@

These two lines appear in the same panel of a manga I'm translating 私の業が 私の全存在をかけてでも拒絶しろと言っている I'm having trouble with both lines. The only translation for 業（ごう）I could find is "karma," but I can't seem to make it make sense in this context. In the second line, I've only managed that...

The whole sentence is 正直今でも未練たれ流しでしんどいです！ Mostly that 「たれ」between 「未練」 and 「流し」is what's really throwing me off. Second question is about this sentence: 転がりだしたら止まらない Is that an expression? Like "once you start, you can't stop" kind of thing?

Android Star Wars or Star Trek

Animal

dogs acoustic guitar or electric guitar?

Odor

hi! thanks for the welcome :D Enjoying MH quite a bit ^^ and yeah, FF is fun! haha :inu

Termite

white-out tape ocean or swimming pool?

that's weird... that's what I did, but there was no Normal blind pick or draft pick... there was only ranked O_O guess I'll try again later. and okay! have fun at your aunt's!