319-Naruto Under the Shooting Star

[Sherlock2008]

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Cleaned By Shade

http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=4067

Coloured By me

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I am practicing the dark conditions,which is my weak point~

so any suggestion would help~

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[emma145]

I like it*^^*

 

[Jaime F.]

Nice page coloring Sherlock2008, and good choice. The only thing I might of done different is color the inside of Naruto's mouth a lighter color in the second panel where his eyes are open, and he's smiling. White, or a color that has white mixed into it, so it's not to bright. As for improving your coloring, to make it look more like night time, I don't have to many good answers for you, but I'm sure someone will. Hopefully one of our more experieced colorists can give you a few pointers, about that. Well anyways, I think it's good that you leave yourself open for advice from other people, and artists. Like Kakashi pointed out, when Naruto was willing to ask Sakura for advice about focusing his chakra in his feet, to walk, or run up tree's, and Sasuke wasn't.

 

[Kazi]

nice colors ^^, with this purple you gave this page a really nice atmosphere

 

[RyuSensei]

The hand panel skin color should be the same as others, night time is here for me, base colors are awesome for that kind of feeling.

 

[Sherlock2008]

thanks everyone~

@JF，I thought it might be the teeth of naruto's inside of his mouth,but seems that I was wrong~thank you

@ryuSensei,really appreciate about the advice of skin,actually I did these different parts in fifferrent times~as a result,that is apparently not accord

 

[Orochimaru]

rox a lot Sherlock ^^

 

[TheChosenOne]

Looks great, Sherlock.