447-05 Burning Legs O_o"

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for first time with tablet it's good.
 

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Yap i agree with Diojim but you should try adding rain drops and animated rain, its not that hard .
 

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animated rain...?? sounds like overkill...
 

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animated rain...?? sounds like overkill...
Some times it does when its just raining over a image, but i was thinking that about animated rain drops as well..

And i wasnt talking about 10000000 drops of rain killing the image, just a tiny bit xD
 

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animated rain? ^^"
 

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animated rain? ^^"
i know it's hard enough and time consuming to color a picture from my own experience,so no need to make an animation in addition^^

anyway,as for the picture i think it's a decent job,the smoking fire looks really cool,it's the best part of the picture.
the effect you wanted to make with the red you added to his clothes is not good,since it does not make sense(it should be a light orange,depends on the light source),the highlights make it look like he would be standing in lava,if you know what i mean.Nice detail though:)
But Nagato's hair is too saturated
the rest is actually fine,though.:amuse
 

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and that's what I've wanted to hear :amuse
Some critics and that kinda stuff ^^

I know that "lava clothes" effect is not looking good (I wanted this to look like burning clothes), but since it was on one layer with all... I didn't wanted to re-paint all this stuff :darn

I'm lazy, I know :amuse
 
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as you may have allready noticed yourself,seperating it on more layers is better,especially if you use effects and highlights and all.

I for one have one layer for each color and extra layers for highlights and effects,so in case i don't like one of the highlights i just can erase it without a problem,though i guess we have a different way of coloring and shading,so well.

I'm glad i was able to give you some helpful critics.:)
 

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I think i'll back to one layer per color/thing system ^^
I've just heard that it can be distracting you etc...
But actually, it's not a problem for me :P
 
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