[463] Mangekyou Sharingan

lee-nus

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its good and all, but nothing special. i mean, you've been doing this for a while now, right? dont you want to step it up a bit? to me, it looks good, but its nothing advanced. the same old stuff, kind of. try to add some new dimensions to your work!

oh, and you really should shrink it down. personally, i would if a panel like that was never bigger than 600 pixels wide, or 800 at the most. why? because there's nothing much in it, just a face. when you cellshade such a big area, it tends to come out flat and especially when its that big. if it was soft shading of matte painting, it would be a different story tho!
 

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i wish everyone would stop basing their shadows off of those lines under the characters eyes

THATS what makes it look so generic
 

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agre Lee-nus ^^

good, but nothing special


I think we can do better only with color bases
 

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Awesome
 

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Very nice dude but u can do more complex stuff!!
 

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don't mind them i like it
 

lee-nus

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don't mind them i like it
"dont mind them"? so just because you like it, constructive criticism should be ignored? i dont think anyone's written anything offending, so there's nothing to "not mind".

there's always room for improvement, and its plain stupid to think anything else.
 

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lee-nus u're right- theres always space for improvement
 
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