[468]Page 15, panel 3, Naruto.

[Poppet4439]

First of all, Hi to everyone, Im just began doing linearts, and thats my 3rd try at doing linearts =] comment it and use it if you want.

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[Aldoor]

His face seems too long. However, I like your style.

 

[Black Lagoon]

the 3rd lineart??
Looks great, nice job ^^

 

[Poppet4439]

thanks, the face went a bit long only because i couldn't be bothered to fix it :L but everything else semmed all rite ,

 

[killbill]

nice job!!

 

[Hand Banana]

The lines for his face are the same size as his hair. Try different sizes but its looks on.

 

[Googlez_kun]

the lineart is still a bit wacky,but it's your 3rd,so it's okay i guess

and you forgot that the strokes on his face are supposed to be red,because he has a little cold,he is sitting in the snow,so yeah^^

the snow looks really cool btw

and the face isn't too long

 

[Poppet4439]

thx everyone, and i didnt know he had a cold O.O i must learn to read manga better =]

 

[-Ren Boy-]

I like the colouring. Did you choose these colours yourself or did you use other colourings for referances?

The snow was done very good , only fault is that you made Naruto have a long chin

thx everyone, and i didnt know he had a cold O.O i must learn to read manga better =]

He didn't have a cold, but come on sitting in the snow will make you cold and make you red

 

[Googlez_kun]

you are welcome Poppet

I like the colouring. Did you choose these colours yourself or did you use other colourings for referances?

you don't have to be a genius to chose the right colors for naruto^^

The snow was done very good , only fault is that you made Naruto have a long chin

and the chin isn't too long!it's the same as in the manga and generally it's not long,it's correct,according to anatomy

He didn't have a cold, but come on sitting in the snow will make you cold and make you red

yeah,that's what i was trying to say^^

 

[- aMt -]

like it =D

the pallete is good =D