ch 457 last double page lineart

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my first line art ...hm



i know its not much but bear with me


i know its not much but bear with me

now here's the colour

i know its not that good but u can critisize if u want :)
 
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thanks i'll post the colored page by tmrw..i think
 

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Haahah I see you like Amaretti.

Well any practice is good pratice.
 

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i did it my self ...... but with some little tips from the one he did
 

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so awesome
 

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i have added the color page to the thread hop u enjoy
 

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the colors are Amazing dude, a masterpiece IMO ^^ (5 stars)
 

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thanks for the lines , and great colo XD
 

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bacteria´s drape so retro XD
nice man I like that!
 

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thanx for the props :)
 

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amazing

just the chinese words are little bit not fit the backgr, sorry~
 

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thats the way kishi did it


and the lines are crappy too
 
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just the chinese words are little bit not fit the backgr, sorry~
thats the way kishi did it

and the lines are crappy too
Now now, don't blame this on Kishimoto :p.

I think what sherlock means is dat you didn't shade the words like you did the flags/curtains/cloth. Like there are curves in the curtain, but you can't see this in the Kanji.

Do you know what I'm saying?
 
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yeah thanks for the detailed explanation
 
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