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Today I decided to take a whack at the tablet clouds I see in so many colorings. I usually dont like tablet clouds but someone told me to give it a try. Also I dont own a tablet and I didnt use anyone elses .:p Not much else to say here cept cleaned by Orochimaru san and colored by me. :D
 

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those "tablet clouds" look a little bit like they were painted at 100% opacity and 90% flow, using the hard round brush. that's no way to make it work, i can tell you that, tablet or not.
also, they are perfectly aligned, which gives them a very unnatural look. as for the rest, i think its a little flat. tsunade's back is oddly shaded too.

it leaves room for improvement, so give it another go! :thumbs
 

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It's a little flat one. Add more shadows.
 

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Really you have very oque improve, but all start at the bottom.

The clouds do not seem n [uvens, and you let the plain blue background, with only one color, but in fact there is a gradient of colors in the background.
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good luck with next jobs
 

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awesome! keep it up! =)
 
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