First attempt at shading -_-

[Y-on]

I'd like to thank Chang and Ryusensei for their tips. I don't think I shaded it too well, I had trouble figuring out what casted a shadow and what didn't. xwx Next thing to work on is...backgrounds!!! Yayyy, XD (Oh wait, my free time's up, looks like I'll have to do that on the weekends Dx). Tips, criticism, and thrashing are welcome. x3

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[admirenkiwi]

i think it needs more impact on the shading, and the lines need more precisions (ex: eyes need to be more circular) but overall its good for your first time =)
good luck, practice makes perfect
im gonna try learn how to do those stuff too >_>
tried, but stuck at the very beginning lol

 

[Y-on]

i think it needs more impact on the shading, and the lines need more precisions (ex: eyes need to be more circular) but overall its good for your first time =)
good luck, practice makes perfect
im gonna try learn how to do those stuff too >_>
tried, but stuck at the very beginning lol

Thank you ^^, yeah I need to work on my lineart making more. xD

 

[RyuSensei]

Meeeh and I thought you were going to do some Reborn. Anyway, not that bad for a first time, you got the tools good atleast, now you gotta work more on lines and shading/lightsource :]

 

[Y-on]

Meeeh and I thought you were going to do some Reborn. Anyway, not that bad for a first time, you got the tools good atleast, now you gotta work more on lines and shading/lightsource :]

Lol I am, but I just wanted to try out everything first to see if I had the basics partially down. I want my Reborn coloring to come out decent. :3 Thanks, shading is hard. TT.TT

 

[Jaime F.]

Well it's good to hear you welcome criticism good, or bad. Some artists just can't handle being told they did something wrong, or that they could of done something better. Anyways Tsuny, its not to bad. I think you did a pretty well, for it being your first time trying to use shadows in your coloring. Anyways, it looks like your getting some good advice here from the other artists. It's definetly a good thing to be open to advice from more experienced artists, and that's another good trait you seem to have besides being open to criticism. Well Tsuny, I definetly think you have the potential to be a good artist, so keep practicing. I look forward to seeing your progress in the future.

 

[NTM__]

nice!