Cool Hiruko, I like this style a lot. The only thing I'd change, is the color of the middle section of Naruto's teeth. I just think that area would look a lot better blacked out, instead of left white. If Naruto's teeth are supposed to be clenched together, then that middle section shouldn't even be there. With teeth, normally you have the top jaw, and bottom jaw, which makes 2 sections that should be colored white. I'm not sure if that 3rd section was originally there, or whether it's a gap between the upper, and lower jaw, but to me, it just doesn't look right colored white. I guess I should probably take a second look @ the original to find out though, so I'll do that later. Well Hiruko, it's really cool to see you try something different. Keep up the good work, and keep thinking outside of the box.