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§madara§

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v1


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Love the colors of v1 but v2 does hurt my eyes @_@
 

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Looks like you may have improved a little bit Madara, good job, and good effort. However there are still a couple things, that you could of done a little better on. For the most part, I think this is one of your better colorings though. One thing I would prefer to be different is the color of Kakashi's shoulder patch. That particular shade of orange reminds me of carrots, so I definetly would of liked it better if it were colored a dark shade of red instead. The only other thing I see that could be touched up on, is the lineart around Kakashi's left shoulder. Besides those 2 particular things, this is a really good coloring for someone at your level. Now as for the second one, it's kind of neat, but it's probably just your coloring with a negative effect added to it. It does look kind of cool though, and it would probably light up under a black light well, so I'm sure someone will like it. Well keep up the good work Madara, I definetly think you improved a little bit more. Just remember, that progress is progress no matter how small it is, so you're doing better. By the way, if I'm wrong about how you made your second coloring, then by all means, please do correct me.
 
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thank you, Jaime, are pleased to improve. Pultroppo however nonstante all, is a 2 stars ç_ç But will improve! the promise is a site of my driving ninja Ö__Ö
however the second was a joke
 

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i like the colours of V1 but the background is very simple, you should fix it, and in the V2.... is kakashi on the Tsukiyomi ??, keep it up
 

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yes, The sense was that
 

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Looks very good, madara; I like V1. :)
 
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