Kakashi-san

[lmmortal]

well, here again my sixth coloring ^^
please comment me again and i need your suggestion of course.

and yeah..thx for ziaja for such a nice lineart!

 

[Jaime F.]

Decent coloring for your 6th one Immortal. I don't know if Ziaja had his name on the lineart before you colored it, but if he did you porobably should of left it on there, but is good that you thanked him in your post. Some of the artists here get upset if you don't leave their signature on their lineart. If you ever use Shade's lineart, which you should because it's generally pretty good, then always make sure you leave his signature on it. I don't know about Ziaja, but Shade will definetly get upset , if you erased his name. Just some friendly advice, and a warning for any future colorings you do. Well this is definetly a cool panel to color, you made a good choice in coloring it. Overall your coloring looks pretty good, except for a couple thing you could work on doing better in the future. 1 thing I recommend you do, is learn a few different good techniques to color in hair. If you know Lee_nus, or RyuSensei well enough to ask them for advice, then I recommend asking them. I think they're both pretty good, at colorig in hair, and making it look more detailed.

 

[lmmortal]

i'm sorry sir..really sorry
okay, i'll edit that version..really sorry to Ziaja..and thx for the advice sir.

 

[Jaime F.]

i'm sorry sir..really sorry
okay, i'll edit that version..really sorry to Ziaja..and thx for the advice sir.

You're welcome Immortal, and good job for being quick in action about it. I'm sure Ziaja will appreciate it. Well Immortal I think you're doing well so far, so keep up the good work.

 

[RyuSensei]

Wa. I got praised by Jaime. I feel good. D:
The shading is good, I like it, it's not really hard but it still looks appealing, the mask looks good though it could have been better with a bit of dark on the right part and the metallic thingie is nice but you forgot to show that the Konoha mark was carved with some shading and also forgot to shade the band.
The eye is kinda off, no shading on it and that's a real problem, first of all never let something white, and since this sharingan is like the focus point of this panel letting it white kinda kills it. Also don't forget that the sharingan is red and that if you want to do a brighlight it's not in the middle but on sides.
As for the hair this style definetely doesn't suit your soft shading, try working more with the smudge tool between 1/3 px to make it look more realistic.
If I don't make sense don't mind me, it's 10am and I just came home, been partying the whole night.

 

[lmmortal]

@RyuSensei
Thx very much ryusensei!
i will trying harder on my next colouring sir.
and please keeping give me advices sir

 

[RyuSensei]

Stop the sir lol, I'm young <_<

 

[lmmortal]

i'm younger anyway :P

 

[- aMt -]

their colors are good, but
I think I can say something

the skin is very good .. but you could darken more in the nose and the corner of his eye ... well as it did in the ear.

the light of the bandana is also nice, but you committed the same mistake in not darken the nose ... Ryusesei's remarks are also certain about the metal and hair on it but I can not say much because I am not so good .... to speak the truth I am terrible nsta area (the advice of Ryusensei also will help me a lot)


see there, amaterasu-kun.deviantart.com - if you want

 

[Jaime F.]

i'm younger anyway :P

What's up Immortal, I don't care if you call me sir. My friends, and I always call each other sir in a friendly, and joking matter. Yes you are younger than me, so I guess it's ok, but most people in there teens, and twenties don't like it because it makes the feel old. Unfortunately, or fortunately, I'm asian pacific islander like you are, so I look 10 years younger than I really am. It sucks looking young sometimes though, especially when people younger than think you're their age, or even younger. It's a hassle at the liquor store if you need to buy something only adults can get, and you don't have your I.D. card on you. I guess my youthful appearance is kind of why I got interested in vampires, and immortals in high school. Well anyways, you can call me sir all you want, but be prepared to be called sir also if you do.

 

[- aMt -]

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What's up Immortal, I don't care if you call me sir. My friends, and I always call each other sir in a friendly, and joking matter. Yes you are younger than me, so I guess it's ok, but most people in there teens, and twenties don't like it because it makes the feel old. Unfortunately, or fortunately, I'm asian pacific islander like you are, so I look 10 years younger than I really am. It sucks looking young sometimes though, especially when people younger than think you're their age, or even younger. It's a hassle at the liquor store if you need to buy something only adults can get, and you don't have your I.D. card on you. I guess my youthful appearance is kind of why I got interested in vampires, and immortals in high school. Well anyways, you can call me sir all you want, but be prepared to be called sir also if you do.

hehehe ...

How are you Mr James ...

I can get into the subject?

no one here calls me sir, that annoying. it's just because I am young (14 years, but with much experience) or because I am new here ... they call up the Shade of God ... that unfair world ... I also want to be hamado sir ...

doing what I am just a human ...

 

[lmmortal]

@kun_amt
wah! really thx for the comment and the suggestion, sir! LOL

btw, btw i dont care how old you all, i just trying to call, all people here as sir. not to mention they were younger, or whatever . i hope that wont be a problem here, or will it?

and, sorry my english is bad.