nARUTO 408 [SASUKE COVER]

jorge__itachi

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Ok thats my version of this cover, i hope you like it and i want comments ^^




happy summer! bye^^
 

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Welcome back jorge. I like the 2nd versione, but I think that Sasuke's mouth is strange :\
However, good job.
 

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rox a lot :)
 

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I really like the second one a lot Jorge, good job. You always do interesting things with your coloring, and sometimes it turns out really good. Your second version of the cover is a good example of when it's turned out good.
 

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i'll be a bitch and give you some pointers...
first off, its too glossy for me.
his arm looks like that of an old man
his rope belt looks very detached from the rest
the back part of his hair looks a little odd, so does his mouth.
on his right shoulder, the shade is on the cloth instead of on the skin. actually, it could be a combination, but no shade on the skin looks odd there...

im sure you can take care of all these stuff, if you'd want to. its a matter of taste too though ^^;;
 

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good jorge_itachi of NU
jeeje good nice!
 

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Absolutely Amazing...

Keep up the nice touch and style >>> I love it
 

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Great work as always, both colored versions are awesome. :D
 
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