Naruto Sage Smile

lee-nus

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the shading is simple, but not bad. the sage marks are red though, not black.
perhaps you could also add some shading to mark his shoulder a little?
and i would suggest you give him an upper lip and add more shadow under his hair.
 

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you see the thin little shading you did under his hair? now look at the big shading on his left cheek

do bigger shading like you did on his cheek, dont get so particular

i dont know if you know what i mean, but shades take up more of an object than small little lines

other then that, it isnt bad. kinda plain and boring, nothing spectacular
 

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cool!
 

Jaime F.

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Like the backgrounds in both versions of your colorings Naruto Sunshine, good job. Naruto himself, is okay, but why didn't you color his sage mode eye markings red?
 
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