pag 03-cap 446

[genny@b]

http://genny-b.deviantart.com/art/pag-03-of-cap-44-naruto-122069239
this is my first lineart
comment please...

 

[Toobi]

some recomendations, when you are going to clean someting, use the RAW to se the details or use a clean Vr of the manga.....
i don't like the colours that you use, you should use other colours more pleasent to the sight, and what a shinny red the one that u used in the jiraiya's face!, look at the anime for some ideas...

keep trying, no se como decirlo... the practice make the master XD
oh i almost forgive it, nice work with the lines, to be the first try

 

[- aMt -]

nots a great job, but keep it!

 

[genny@b]

some recomendations, when you are going to clean someting, use the RAW to se the details or use a clean Vr of the manga.....
i don't like the colours that you use, you should use other colours more pleasent to the sight, and what a shinny red the one that u used in the jiraiya's face!, look at the anime for some ideas...

keep trying, no se como decirlo... the practice make the master XD
oh i almost forgive it, nice work with the lines, to be the first try

thanks for recomendations