Pain Arc tribute

[Erian]

Well, couldn´t think of an better title, these are the lines, color will follow later, they are free for everyone to color, just give me a credit, when you want I´ll upload the psd on rapidshare or somewhere else.
Thinks I know that aren´t alright are:
-Narutos Face and hands
-A few lines I still need to erase from Yondaime
Comments and critic is welcome as always^^
Hope you like it

http://erian1mortal.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-Pain-Act-tribute-lines-117690899

Well, here is the color sketch, Nagatos Hair has the wron color as I see, but oh well..... As you can see I have made a few changes (Naruto looks uglyer than before....), has someone an Idea how to let his hand looking better, well his entire arm with the rasengan, it don´t matters ho often I try it always looks some kind of terrible, anyone an Idea?

http://erian1mortal.deviantart.com/art/--117954123

 

[- aMt -]

very cool.!

But could be better

 

[DarkFlameDragon]

it's very good but the lines are incomplete and...why is hinata smiling?

 

[alpvonkri]

Interesting, good job!!!

 

[Erian]

Thanks guys^^
@Sasuke-Amaterasu: Well, Hinata is always smiling, I just wanted to have her in the pic, because she was an pretty important character in this arc to me.

 

[VASSiLi]

Mh, nice but I don't like Hinata's face.

 

[Erian]

Thanks, you´re right, now that I look at it, I should rework that,too.

 

[Jaime F.]

Pretty cool, for the most part, I like it. There are only 2 things I don't like, and it involves Naruto, and Hinata. Starting with Naruto, I think he looks to short, and child like. Sure Naruto's only 16, and I know that he's supposed to be shorter than God Realm Pain, but he's only 2 years away from being 18. As for Hinata, I don't like how you drew her face. As for the rest of the characters, I like them, and you did a very good job drawing them. Well, I hope you do some touch ups, and color this soon. Keep up the good work, and keep practicing.

 

[Erian]

Thanks Jamie, I think today I have some time to do some corrections and changing a few things, like throwing some things out and bring something in and begin coloring