"Rainy mission..."

[Meri_maslinkata]

That is a page from manga chapter 355.

Hope you like it.

 

[thewar]

Sorry, I don't like the line arts

 

[Orochimaru]

the colors is great

 

[tubeyo]

I like both lines and colors, good job Meri

 

[Jaime F.]

Nice Meri, I think it's better than last time for sure, but I still think there are a couple things that you could of done better on. First with the good stuff. Your color choice is good, and the lighting is brighter than the last page you colored that was similar to this one. I also really like how Kakashi, and Naruto turned out in every panel that they're in. The rain looks good as well. Now there are only a couple things I think you could of done better on, and that is the appearance of Sai, as well as Hinata. Now i'm not sure if Hinata looks different because of the person who did the lines, you, or Kishimoto himself, but I don't think it was your fault. Sai on the other hand, kind of looks like a doll, as if he were lifeless. I think it's because of his eyes, but i'm not sure. So overall I think you did a good job, minus 1 or 2 things at the most. I definetly see improvement, but I think there's definetly more for you to learn, and get better at. You're on the right track though, so don't be sad about it.