samui

[§madara§]

 

[JMC]

nice job

 

[Kazi]

looks good at all, but these yellow wristlets looks odd >.<

 

[§madara§]

 

[Jaime F.]

Not to bad Madara, but I agree with Kazi, the yellow wrist bands don't match with that shade of blue. Another thing I noticed, was that the lineart looks kind of jagged, but you didn't do the lineart, so it's not your fault.(Sorry Criss-kun) Well anyways, I think it's cool that you tried something new, by making parts of Samui's skin shiny, and reflective. If you're not sure what it is I'm taliking about, it's the 5 small white spots on her chest, her left arm, and both thighs. As I was saying, it's a good idea, and I like that you tried something new, but I think you could of done it better. I don't think leaving those parts white, was the best way to get the effect you were trying to get. I think it was RyuSensei, one of the translators, and artists here, who used a similar effect on his coloring of Samui. I'm not a big fan of the effect you were trying to get in the first place, but I think RyuSensei does it really well. If you ask him he might be able to give you some tips, on how to effectively do what you were doing. Well Madara, I'm sorry that I had more criticsm's for you than compliments this time, but trust me, my intention's are good. I'm just pointing out some of the things you need to improve on, so eventually you get really good at this. You're still very young, so you have a lot of time to refine your skills. If you keep dedicating a lot of time to this, I'm sure you'll eventually get really good at it.

 

[RyuSensei]

I'm disappointed by you, you could have done way better on that one, the colors are odd, the shading is totally off (worst part = hair) and well yea, I was the one to use that plastic effect white brighlight on my "fanart" of Samui.