Naruto and Gamakichi

[TanukiUdon]

Can't remember if this was the cover for a chapter, or for one of the databooks or something. Also, unfortunately, I can't remember who I got the line art from. I had started this a good while ago, and finally decided to finish it yesterday.

http://dtealia.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-and-Gamakichi-116598516
(Download shows the super sized original version)


This is my fifth colouring, and I'm definitely trying my best to improve. (looking at my older gallery pieces, I feel pretty happy to say I am!)

Comments and critiques would be most welcome!

 

[KnuckleheadedNinja]

Looks good, TanukiUdon.

I like your other one of Deva Pein too.

 

[sam034]

I like it

It's different from most of the colourings on this site. So I like the fresh approach.

I think it's great your looking to improve, I think no one should ever stop looking at their own work objectively. Looking at your other pictures, I can definitely see improvement

G'day

 

[Googlez_kun]

very nice man!!
and that's really,really good for your 5th coloring!
keep it up!

 

[VASSiLi]

Interesting coloring. I really like the style and the colors. Keep it up!

 

[- aMt -]

really great

 

[TheChosenOne]

Looks good, Udon.

 

[Jaime F.]

I like the colors you used for the background.

 

[lee-nus]

for one thing, i think you should work on your palette! your colors have a very 'muddy' look! as always, learning by watching others is a good tip! keep at it!!

 

[killbill]

this is really nice..good job

 

[nanocigt]

nice coloring

 

[TanukiUdon]

for one thing, i think you should work on your palette! your colors have a very 'muddy' look! as always, learning by watching others is a good tip! keep at it!!

Hm, I can see what you're talking about. I did use black to shade a lot.

Thanks! And thanks as well to everyone for all the comments!

 

[lee-nus]

Hm, I can see what you're talking about. I did use black to shade a lot.

oh, thats the biggest no-no!
now, be a good girl and stop doing that instantly! XDD