Spoiler 446 // Yahiko

[goldenhans]

Yahiko - Cleaning and color by me.



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I hope you like it, critics are welcome.

Greetings to all

 

[lee-nus]

uh, what is up with those light sources? the lighting is completely off, but the shading isnt bad. so you know what to fix...

 

[goldenhans]

uh, what is up with those light sources? the lighting is completely off, but the shading isnt bad. so you know what to fix...

I imagine a night scene, and yahiko in front of a city burning in flames, that's what I try to illustrate

 

[lee-nus]

ah, ok. its a little tricky, yeah. i think the biggest problem is the sky. its too bright at the horizon!

 

[Jaime F.]

The lighting maybe slightly inaccurate, but I do like what Goldenhans was trying to do. I think the colors you used for the lighting is very eye catching, and that's definitely a good thing. The coloring itself, and the shading look good to. The 1 thing I'm not used to seeing, is Yahiko as a living character without the Rinn'egan. Of course that's nothing against what you did. Well, it was nice to see something new from you, and keep up the good work.

 

[Sherlock2008]

I like that dark vision

 

[- aMt -]

so good

 

[VASSiLi]

Nice job! I like it!

 

[goldenhans]

ah, ok. its a little tricky, yeah. i think the biggest problem is the sky. its too bright at the horizon!

Ok! no problem =) The ideas had clear in my mind, but I failed to express in the colored, especially in the background Thank you very much for your comment, lee-nus

The lighting maybe slightly inaccurate, but I do like what Goldenhans was trying to do. I think the colors you used for the lighting is very eye catching, and that's definitely a good thing. The coloring itself, and the shading look good to. The 1 thing I'm not used to seeing, is Yahiko as a living character without the Rinn'egan. Of course that's nothing against what you did. Well, it was nice to see something new from you, and keep up the good work.

Thanks Jaime F. =) I also find it very strange yahiko without rinnengas and piercing xD

I like that dark vision

Wow! Thank you for your comment Sherlock2008

so good

Thanks - aMt - =)

Nice job! I like it!

Thanks VASSiLi ^^

 

[Orochimaru]

great dude

 

[goldenhans]

great dude

Thanks oro =)

 

[Googlez_kun]

yeah i agree with lee-nus that the sky is a bit too bright,but i like your idea and the coloring and the lines!
great job!

 

[Y-on]

I think one of your largest problems is that your have high lights on your smoke in a strange manner. Smoke does not catch light in hard nor soft edges, lighting really illuminates through it as it does not have quite a solid surface, such as how light shones through water.