[446.17]Naruto

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http://amaterasu-kun.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-my-Answer-122732973

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hope you like

 

[Erian]

I like the way you shade your pictures. First I wanted to critizise the eyes, because they lookes like they had to less details in them, but they fit into the rest of the picture perfectly, so that´s no point. Nice work!

 

[portgas d.ace]

OoO....very nice coloring..........

 

[lee-nus]

i think the mouth needs a little more work! ^^ and, his eyebrows probably shouldnt reflect in his eyes, since he has eyebrows, just that ppl dont tend to think about them since they are just black lines here.
also, if the sunlight hits him from the behind his right side, i think the shading on that cheek would be rather the opposite...! ^^;

 

[Jaime F.]

Nice coloring of Naruto Amt, good job. I really like what you did with this panel a lot. As for criticism, I do kind of agree with what Lee_nus says about Naruto's mouth, and maybe the shading on Naruto's cheek. At the same time, I like how you colored Naruto's mouth. Coloring the upper section as Naruto's teeth/upper jaw, and coloring the bottom section with a fleshy color works well in this panel. As for the shading, even though some of it might be on the wrong side, it still looks really good despite that. Most people, unless they're experienced artists, probably wouldn't notice it. Well like always, it's good to see something new from you Amt, and keep up the good work!

 

[Googlez_kun]

i agree with lee-nus,but i really love it!amazing amt!

 

[Bohemia22]

Wow dude that's awesome. I love how you did his nose. Nothing to bitch about.

 

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i think the mouth needs a little more work! ^^ and, his eyebrows probably shouldnt reflect in his eyes, since he has eyebrows, just that ppl dont tend to think about them since they are just black lines here.
also, if the sunlight hits him from the behind his right side, i think the shading on that cheek would be rather the opposite...! ^^;

Thank you very much. haha
It seems that even with a good time coloring, I insisted on making mistakes on things simple (or complex).
Thank you for saying what you think, really think the fund should be reversed, or the reflection of the cheeks should be left with a more orange color (closest to the color of heaven).

I need to improve a lot, thanks for my help.

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Nice coloring of Naruto Amt, good job. I really like what you did with this panel a lot. As for criticism, I do kind of agree with what Lee_nus says about Naruto's mouth, and maybe the shading on Naruto's cheek. At the same time, I like how you colored Naruto's mouth. Coloring the upper section as Naruto's teeth/upper jaw, and coloring the bottom section with a fleshy color works well in this panel. As for the shading, even though some of it might be on the wrong side, it still looks really good despite that. Most people, unless they're experienced artists, probably wouldn't notice it. Well like always, it's good to see something new from you Amt, and keep up the good work!

Glad you enjoyed. I also think that despite the problems is a cute picture ^^
haha I will try to improve.

Thank you very much!

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thanks you guys =D

 

[lee-nus]

Thank you very much. haha
It seems that even with a good time coloring, I insisted on making mistakes on things simple (or complex).
Thank you for saying what you think, really think the fund should be reversed, or the reflection of the cheeks should be left with a more orange color (closest to the color of heaven).

I need to improve a lot, thanks for my help.

its good you can take constructive criticism the right way, som ppl here are really sensitive about it! and that way, you can never learn! so, im sure you will do better with each picture! ^^

 

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its good you can take constructive criticism the right way, som ppl here are really sensitive about it! and that way, you can never learn! so, im sure you will do better with each picture! ^^

I think it really is. Thanks again.
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great job *_*

one day I catch you ô/

 

[lee-nus]

I think it really is. Thanks again.
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great job *_*

one day I catch you ô/

lol, oh nooooes! dont post my two-year old crappy art here! XD someone might think im still at that level!!! XDDD
believe i did that with the touchpad on my laptop though... x_x that might actually be something to be proud of though! and to people who say you cant soft shade with a MOUSE - have you tried touchpad?

 

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lol, oh nooooes! dont post my two-year old crappy art here! XD someone might think im still at that level!!! XDDD
believe i did that with the touchpad on my laptop though... x_x that might actually be something to be proud of though! and to people who say you cant soft shade with a MOUSE - have you tried touchpad?

haha

wow, this really is something to be proud of.

There never painted with touchpad, once used a tablet (loaned).

here it is:

http://mangahelpers.com/photoplog/index.php?n=7630


will be harder than it seemed you achieve xD

http://lee-nus.deviantart.com/art/Hyrule-Sunset-122167750

 

[Sherlock2008]

amazing details~

 

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thanks very much!

 

[killbill]

great job...but i think that the eyes should be more blue..

 

[pineappleherb]

it looks perfect when i put my hand over his nose and mouth :/

 

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ahha xD

anyway, thanks you