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sam034

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It looks a bit flat and pretty plain.

Although people were harsh to you in you other thread, you should take their advice and try to change some things.

- Change the colours you choose
- If you colour a close up like this there should be more detail,imo

I do like that you did the lines yourself and the slight touch of the firelight is also nice. plus I saw that you're still reasonably young so it would be ridicukous to expect Da vinci paintings:)
 

tEchIe

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ok, your lines are improving, what software and tools are you using ?
 

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I use photoshop cs2 with pen tool
 

tEchIe

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I use photoshop cs2 with pen tool
I see, well, why cell-shading ? skill (are you still learning the basics) or choice (you prefer how cell-shadings looks over soft-shadings) ?
 

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boring panel choice
 

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dont like x_x

but still, it is the only way to improve.
 
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