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[undying]

Lol
long time no see guys

this is my new art
actually, I wanna posted yesterday !
but, school killing me :l

cleaned by me







screenshot


hope u enjoyed

 

[Orochimaru]

rox dude ^^
but, school killing me :l (2)
;~

 

[DarkFlameDragon]

thanks for the lines with the background

 

[tEchIe]

it's good, but I don't think that that's his collar bone, but rather I think it's an inner fold in his shirt... at least that's how it looks from the raw...

 

[lee-nus]

the shading on the jacket is weird. also, i wonder why nobody gives him lips, the face looks so flat like that. also, as techie pointed out, that is not his collar bone, its the small "recess" just above the collar bone... so definitely no highlight there. oh, and please remove that rightmost line on his nose, makes him look like a f*cking nose monkey.

in case i need to elaborate on the last part:
http://www.tanmonkey.com/images/monkey/proboscis-monkey-big-nose.gif

 

[pineappleherb]

^ seriously! the way people are handling the nose in this panel is killing me man

 

[tEchIe]

the shading on the jacket is weird. also, i wonder why nobody gives him lips, the face looks so flat like that. also, as techie pointed out, that is not his collar bone, its the small "recess" just above the collar bone... so definitely no highlight there. oh, and please remove that rightmost line on his nose, makes him look like a f*cking nose monkey.

in case i need to elaborate on the last part:
http://www.tanmonkey.com/images/monkey/proboscis-monkey-big-nose.gif

ROFL !!!

I think kishimoto's lines are a little screwy with this one
he thinks it's the collar bone, you think it's the little bulge above the collar bone, and think it a fold in the coat...
I'm looking here & here, and I'm still not sure...

^ seriously! the way people are handling the nose in this panel is killing me man

kishi's doing... check the raw, seriously fubar; looks like a cross between Kishimoto's style and Hirano's style, very strange

 

[undying]

thanks 4 da comment everybody

>sasuke amaterasu
ur welcome

> orochimaru
hmph, how's ur grade ? O.O

 

[Orochimaru]

7/8 haha xDDD

 

[- aMt -]

look great.

just think about this panel is very equal.

 

[nat]

More Sasuke
thank you for the awesome lines and sweet colors ^^

Lee-nus, that was one sick monkey....*shiver*

 

[undying]

thanks alot there

 

[Jaime F.]

I think some of the lines look slightly loose, but overall, I think you've done a good job. What I mean specifically, is that the line art isn't so bad, to where it looks jagged, but it doesn't exactly look like perfect straight lines either. As for the coloring itself, it looks good, so keep it up. By the way, that nose monkey's crazy looking.

 

[Googlez_kun]

what should i say?
it's awesome!!
and you keep improving!