Scetch colorings, Sakura fanart

[Erian]

Well, I was a bit bored and tried to get an feeling for painting fast. I also tryed to archieve an cool feeling by doing so, but yeah failed XD.

Chapter 449 Page 17
lines by tEchIe
http://erian1mortal.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-449-P17-125198997

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Chapter 450
http://erian1mortal.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-450-125199067

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And here an little speedpaint from Sakura
http://erian1mortal.deviantart.com/art/Sakura-speedpaint-125199152

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I also recorded it^^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IshJ-Bd_vM

So, thats all for today, hope ya like them, please give me a lot critic!

 

[- aMt -]

i lke the stile D

cool jobs

 

[tEchIe]

very good brush work, though sakura needs an upper lip, and you need to hone your nose skills...

 

[pineappleherb]

gg

 

[sam034]

I like the colours you used, and some other little things.

But I do have to say you really need some proper and proportionate lines!

Maybe it's an idea to stick to Kishimoto's lines first.

Also the aspect ratio of sasuke's image looks of, it looks strechted.

 

[Erian]

Thanks guys^^
@tEchIe:
Yeah, noses are always a bit hard for me, especially when they are in manga pictures, but I will work on that^^.
@sam034:Thanks^^
On the picture to chapter 450 I used Kishimotos lines, but because I prefer to work without lines it´s hard for me to stick with them, well learning by doing eh?
Yeah I resized Sasukes pic wrong a bit, I´ll fix that when I got more time^^;

 

[tEchIe]

Thanks guys^^
@tEchIe:
Yeah, noses are always a bit hard for me, especially when they are in manga pictures, but I will work on that^^.

It's OK, I got the same problem eyes comes easy now, I only recently figured out lips and I'm currently streamlining my noses - that's to say, I can do them properly, it just takes too long

good luck !

 

[Erian]

Thanks again^^, I just need to draw more I think, then it comes as it should^^

 

[lee-nus]

im sorry, i dont mean to bring you down or anything, but i dont even know where to start here. i think you should take a good look at some really good art by accomplished artists, or look at real life photographies and study the human anatomy, how light falls, colors, tunes and hues, and so on. i dont know how much experience you have, and painting/coloring is never easy if you want a nice outcome, but i think you really need to start from scratch and take things easy. speed painting, as i see it, is for really skilled artists who have learned the basics well. i think you are just getting ahead of yourself, so just take it easy and allow yourself to learn things little by little.

 

[Erian]

Thanks^^
With an well manered and honest critic, you can never bring me down, just to say that. Most times I am really thakful, no matter how harsh the critic really is, when it is spoken right and not like:" Hey looks like shit, work harder!", then I take it as an advice to work harder, so thanks again I really appreciate it.^^
Well, I can do better, as I said I was trying to get some got feeling for working fast and getting an ok looking effect with that.