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One of my newest works for Gaara France. And..um.. check it out! 
Ch. 264, Naruto gets seriously pissed off
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the hair looks awesome, but theres a lot of room for improvement with the rest
you can get rid of the black line separating his teeth and gums, make the gums themselves a darker shade, the blood vessels on his eyes look wack, ditch em or darken em, experiment. the headband could be way way WAY cooler, especially considering the orange glow you've got going on, it also might be better to keep the original lines for the wrinkles on his face instead of your own lines, make the shadows on his face more uniform, what i mean is make them bigger? more solid, less individual and separated, give him a big shadow coming down his entire face instead of a small one under his lip, a small one on his upper lip, cheeks, inbetween his eyes, etc
if you understood any of that, give it a shot and see how it turns out ^____^
you can get rid of the black line separating his teeth and gums, make the gums themselves a darker shade, the blood vessels on his eyes look wack, ditch em or darken em, experiment. the headband could be way way WAY cooler, especially considering the orange glow you've got going on, it also might be better to keep the original lines for the wrinkles on his face instead of your own lines, make the shadows on his face more uniform, what i mean is make them bigger? more solid, less individual and separated, give him a big shadow coming down his entire face instead of a small one under his lip, a small one on his upper lip, cheeks, inbetween his eyes, etc
if you understood any of that, give it a shot and see how it turns out ^____^
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Great!! love the hair awesome job,though i agree with pineappleherb that the gums should be a bit darker...
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i really like the hair, but the skin dont is so good, ^^
keep it
keep it
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Aaah, you're working for Gaara.fr too now :P Nice!
I like everything except the shading on his face, it looks off. And like aMt said I also like the hair a lot. Really done well.
I like everything except the shading on his face, it looks off. And like aMt said I also like the hair a lot. Really done well.
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I'm just a "guest" - not their regular artist.
Anyways thanks for the feedback. I will fix his forehead protector when I feel like it.