Sakura Ink

[PhoenixRoy]

Please, point out anything that you think looks odd about the picture. I want the color version to be far superior than the inked version. :P

http://phoenixroy.deviantart.com/art/Sakura-Ink-132452401

I'll update with a color version...Hopefully. I like the idea of Sakura in Naruto's jacket. I a huge NarutoxSakura fan.

I'm going to make some edits in photoshop. Maybe add some accessories, change the shape of the face, and anatomy problems.

 

[- aMt -]

cute ^^

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would be better to have a nice background

 

[PhoenixRoy]

Thanks for the comment. I've decided that all more works should have background with them. :/ I don't do backgrounds that much so it'll be a good learning experience.

 

[Googlez_kun]

oooookay
let's start^^:
first of all my complain is that she wears a naruto jacket**cough*NaruHina*cough**,but that's not important here
moving on to the overall anatomy,it seems that you took the anatomy style from Oda-sensei the hands are a bit too big,though they look fine as a drawing itself,they're just too big and don't really fit to the body in my humble opinion.the legs look fine and so do the arms,but there is still her throat,it's too long...
then you have to just move her pair of eyes to the right a bit,it should be perfect then^^
overall it's a nice job

i hope it's not too much complaining and that it helps you^^'

 

[PhoenixRoy]

What you posted is exactly what I'm looking for. A nice critique. I don't want to spend hours coloring something that isn't too good :/. Even if it's my own work. Lol. That's one reason why I hardly color my own stuff, but I should change that.

Thanks for the critique. Also, about the Oda thing, I've been watching a lot of One Piece lately. Lol. I'm re-reading it from chapter one.

 

[Googlez_kun]

What you posted is exactly what I'm looking for. A nice critique. I don't want to spend hours coloring something that isn't too good :/. Even if it's my own work. Lol. That's one reason why I hardly color my own stuff, but I should change that.

Thanks for the critique. Also, about the Oda thing, I've been watching a lot of One Piece lately. Lol. I'm re-reading it from chapter one.

good that it wasn't too harsch and too much^^
anyway i'm looking forward to the changes

from chapter 1?are you still sane?
that would kill me^^

 

[Black Lagoon]

nice work

 

[PhoenixRoy]

Well to tell you the truth I haven't even watched/read chapter 1 one or episode one of One Piece. I got into the show during the Arlong arc and then stopped watching and then started again during the Alabasta arc stopped and then started from the Skypedia arc. So yeah... Lol.

the next Naruto piece I'm going to post is going to be of Sasuke :O. Then the colored Sakura.

 

[Googlez_kun]

Well to tell you the truth I haven't even watched/read chapter 1 one or episode one of One Piece. I got into the show during the Arlong arc and then stopped watching and then started again during the Alabasta arc stopped and then started from the Skypedia arc. So yeah... Lol.

the next Naruto piece I'm going to post is going to be of Sasuke :O. Then the colored Sakura.

i have to admit...that i'm the very same!
that's why i also tried to reread it,but guess what?..i failed

cool!looking forward to this one,too!^^
tomorrow i will upload a sasuke pic i just drew(kid sasuke^^),so maybe you can give me critics for it,too