[356] page 03 cleaned and colored by pauleta

pauleta

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this was at third page but i guess it's a cover) it's my first post at mangahelpers) hope you like it)))

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Thank you Amaretti for your tutorials:kkthumbs

and sorry for my english;)
 
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From what I can see it looks nice. But you'll have to show some bigger images. The linked images are really small. Maybe you saved them this small?
 

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From what I can see it looks nice. But you'll have to show some bigger images. The linked images are really small.
Thx i fixed it)
 

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Welcome, I hope you enjoy here :tem

and great job
 

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cool, but the shadows are much soft X_X'
 

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Everything is great, the shadows, the colours. But sadly is it let down by the softness of it as -aMt- stated. What I see is just two colours being mixed alot, which is not that great. For it too look soft and natural, you should have added more tones THEN mixed it a tiny bit. But don't worry, soon come.

You learned a lot from those tutorials I am sure of it ;)
 

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looks great , its a good line art , and colo XD
 

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nice work!
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