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I don't like the snow and the background, they are seems too flat, and I don't like their color. However, the other parts are great.
 

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dam them some bright colors for being in the snow
 

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for to mention .. i dont realy like it too. rushed it may be thats why
 

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I personally love it e-maney! Some things could be better, but everyone's got that.

great job.
 

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aint bad, generally i like it!
 

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very well done
 

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thanks lee-nus, sam034, BL
 

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Hey this is already hella good if you said you rushed it, imagine if you take your time on this it'll be a killer.
 

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I pretty much agree with Lee_nus. In general, I like it, but I'm sure you could do better. Knowing that you rushed things a bit, you should strive to do better next time. Also, just to let you know, I gave you 4 stars in the Image Gallery.
 

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nothing special, but you did a good job
 

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i just noticed sakura and sais shadowed faces from the building? if thats what you were going for, nice attn to detail

you have a lot of potential, just know.. stop rushing everything so much, spend some time on something i bet it'll surprise everyone here + me

you get the privilege of getting my opinion while stoned
 

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I pretty much agree with Lee_nus. In general, I like it, but I'm sure you could do better. Knowing that you rushed things a bit, you should strive to do better next time. Also, just to let you know, I gave you 4 stars in the Image Gallery.
well thank u Jaime
 

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good! keep it up!
 

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you forget to shadow of the footprints on the snow

but the rest are great
 
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