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It's not so much a matter of leaving Luffy out as of balancing and pruning the action so that only the key parts are shown. Take for example block B that progressed while leaving space for parallel plots: these chapters felt more balanced and less frustrating than 715.But it does progress the story as the tournament is Luffy's plotline of the whole arc. Why should Oda leave out the title character?
By "dust to dust" I did not imply death in its rawest meaning, but rather that many of these characters will likely not get any significant story time after the tournament is ended (which to the reader is as good as dead). In which case yes, I would much rather learn their names only in separate databooks. And at the very least, introduce them only once, not two or three times each.And what actually makes believe this? As far as shown, no one is dead, but only injured. Some more some less.
Exactly like that. Oda is fleshing out these tournament characters, which is theoretically a good thing, but many of them come from entirely new places, kingdoms so far unheard of, which is where I get the "detached" feeling: it's a lot of new information to stomach - hopefully, the feeling will disappear after enough of the New World has been introduced. I do reckon that some of them are tied to existing plot lines, but not enough in my taste.Well, that doesn't make quite sense, does it? How can a plot line that has the title character in title character init, and that is an important piece of the current arc, be "detached" as you say just by Oda giving some of Luffy's opponents a bit of background?
How to improve? I would like to know for example if any of those fighters have ties to other 3 emperors; where do the Prodence Kingdom and Country of Flowers stand on the geopolitical chessboard; how does the Marine fare in the New World .... This would feel like a better expense of space than 7 pages for showing off the Funk brothers and 3 for Jean Ango.
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That would be awesome, actually all of the strawhats would be awesome.