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Aight, 12 Chapters feels like a good stopping point.
I think it's fine so far. I think the art style is wonderful and I think the plot, as it stands, is fun, but I do find it a bit slow for my taste. Hasn't really gotten it's hooks into me.
Unsure if this changes, but one thing I also wish is that we would've seen a little bit more of Deborah's pre-isekai life. I like her motivation and plan for her new life, but I feel like I don't know much about her. I get that she doesn't want to be a doormat anymore and she's an awkward lady, but I think it'd be a bit better if we see more compare/contrast moments of her previous life and her current life that spur her decision making.
Like, show that she's always been an introvert, but people keep coming into her space, but her kindness keeps her from speaking up. That way, her feelings about having people avoid her with her new face feels a bit more natural. Or her rejection of marriage. Perhaps her ex was someone she didn't even want to date in the first place, but she did it as a favor to another friend. And now she doesn't want to bother with dating and is especially cautious of anyone else hooking her up with anyone. Just small little moments linking her two lives would go a long way, imo.
Other than that...don't really have much to say about it. I'm likely just a point where nothing is really popping off.
I think it's fine so far. I think the art style is wonderful and I think the plot, as it stands, is fun, but I do find it a bit slow for my taste. Hasn't really gotten it's hooks into me.
Unsure if this changes, but one thing I also wish is that we would've seen a little bit more of Deborah's pre-isekai life. I like her motivation and plan for her new life, but I feel like I don't know much about her. I get that she doesn't want to be a doormat anymore and she's an awkward lady, but I think it'd be a bit better if we see more compare/contrast moments of her previous life and her current life that spur her decision making.
Like, show that she's always been an introvert, but people keep coming into her space, but her kindness keeps her from speaking up. That way, her feelings about having people avoid her with her new face feels a bit more natural. Or her rejection of marriage. Perhaps her ex was someone she didn't even want to date in the first place, but she did it as a favor to another friend. And now she doesn't want to bother with dating and is especially cautious of anyone else hooking her up with anyone. Just small little moments linking her two lives would go a long way, imo.
Other than that...don't really have much to say about it. I'm likely just a point where nothing is really popping off.