Tobi is nagato Ak & Blade

[Haloblade345]

I need more partice on my shadeing but it ok i guess

 

[Gaara_dono]

Lovely work... Greaat choice of colors... The only buts are...
-The shading.... Well more practice ^^ (A notice: you should make the linearts blend with the colors... The work looks plain and pale that way...)
-Also the backgrownd.... You should have worked the backgrownd more..

Anyway... Good work... And thanx for sharing
Sorry for bieng harsh on you... Waiting for more developped artworks in the future ^^

 

[Haloblade345]

Lovely work... Greaat choice of colors... The only buts are...
-The shading.... Well more practice ^^ (A notice: you should make the linearts blend with the colors... The work looks plain and pale that way...)
-Also the backgrownd.... You should have worked the backgrownd more..

Anyway... Good work... And thanx for sharing
Sorry for bieng harsh on you... Waiting for more developped artworks in the future ^^

thankes i am trying to inprove my work as much as i can

 

[lordHokage]

It looks good so far. Keep it up.

 

[Toobi]

good work i like it, but as you said, work in the hading

 

[TheChosenOne]

Great, Keep it up.

 

[Ragna-sama]

Nice, but it looks a litlle bit unglossed.

 

[Baka Taichou]

Hello there Halo blade ! nice coloring . I have some tips for you.
Since you've just started coloring I recommend you first learn/study the Cell-shading style. It's easier , and you can master it faster. The cell-shading style helps you develop the soft -shading style (which you attempted here) and you'll have a better understanding of things at that point so coloring in the soft shading style will be easier.
try this guy out http://stfun.ovh.org/index.php?page=tuto his tutorial is quite the basic stuff at first , If you need tutorials just let me now I'll do my best to find some good ones

 

[Haloblade345]

Hello there Halo blade ! nice coloring . I have some tips for you.
Since you've just started coloring I recommend you first learn/study the Cell-shading style. It's easier , and you can master it faster. The cell-shading style helps you develop the soft -shading style (which you attempted here) and you'll have a better understanding of things at that point so coloring in the soft shading style will be easier.
try this guy out http://stfun.ovh.org/index.php?page=tuto his tutorial is quite the basic stuff at first , If you need tutorials just let me now I'll do my best to find some good ones

I heard of that tutorial but im not that very good at it.Thanks for helping me improve

 

[Baka Taichou]

well it can't be perfect from your first try , you have to work more on it

 

[Haloblade345]

well it can't be perfect from your first try , you have to work more on it

well will use it when i think it's time to use it