Naruto 401-17 by thewar

[thewar]

Hey hey boys this is work of the naruto in chapter 401 in page 17,
i'm working on this work now but now watching The Oc. This a part of work:

here http://paolinowar.deviantart.com/art/The-New-Sasuke-86490356

 

[KALiZU]

Re: Naruto 401-17 in working

You should take off the shadow that his collar made on his face. It's like the light source is coming from under him, which probably isn't. ^^

 

[thewar]

Re: Naruto 401-17 in working

ITS OVER

 

[abcdefghijkL0L]

Re: Naruto 401-17 in working

Its okay, just like a typical cell-shade. You need to work on shadow placement though, since some of them don't match up or are lacking.

 

[Gaara_dono]

Re: Naruto 401-17 in working

And for a typical cell shading... It reaches excellence grade!
Keep up the good work... And aim for perfecting your own style...

Rating: Five straz for sure!

 

[lee-nus]

its already been pointed out, but the shading on sasuke isnt really cohesive. if you imagine your light coming from a constant direction, you'll see what i mean!

 

[thewar]

thanks

 

[Orochimaru]

step by step
rox ^^

 

[thewar]

step by step
rox ^^

is an honour a comment from you ,thanks

 

[TheChosenOne]

Looks Great, thewar, I like it.

 

[Toobi]

a great job!, i really like it!

 

[Orochimaru]

is an honour a comment from you ,thanks

wow
np dude
you do an excelent work ^^

 

[thewar]

thanks oro

 

[black_burn]

Nice job.

 

[thewar]

thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!