*Hawk Akatsuki*Rain wash the time...

[Meri_maslinkata]

The new Hawk Akatsuki.I very like the new look of the team
For the first time i make the rain ^^;
But i think i made it very good...

 

[Orochimaru]

nice Meri

 

[lee-nus]

okay, some constructive crit:

i think the bg is too saturated. the sky looks weird cuz you took photos and pasted them... so there are edges and stuff, which looks unattractive to me... if you wanna use a photo, you should use a real big one, so there are none of that stuff in it. the character shading looks much better, so i think you could improve it! however, it looks like u put some stain texture on top, and that looks bad... it would be much better without it, imo. adding a texture can be a great finish if you do it with a little finesse though! keep it up, and try harder!

 

[Jaime F.]

Looks fairly good, and I like parts of it, but just not all of it. I do kind of like the over all darkness it portrays, and you did a good job coloring the characters themselves. The rest of it is ok, but I think you could of done a little bit better.

 

[alpvonkri]

Good job!!!

 

[KnuckleheadedNinja]

great job.

 

[Meri_maslinkata]

Thank you so much for the comments,specially of "Jaime F." and the criticism of "Lee-nus" (i don't expect something else from you )

 

[lee-nus]

Thank you so much for the comments,specially of "Jaime F." and the criticism of "Lee-nus" (i don't expect something else from you )

oooh noes, i hope u didnt expect it cuz im too bitchy and whiny? ^^;;;
crit (when constructive) has always been helpful to me, so i thought i'd pass it on... xDD

 

[lordHokage]

I like it but the background is too dark and the rain drops needs some work.

 

[Meri_maslinkata]

Тhank you xD
"Lee-nus" don't you know,you are our critic here in MH and you are very helpful for the elaboration.

 

[lee-nus]

i am...? that sounds terrible!! ^^;;; i hope its useful criticism though, i dont just wanna be whining! xDDD