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Time for draw is: 40/55 minutes.
For line art 1 hour.
tommorow i finished coloured.
Comments/Critic?
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The Hogake Line Art
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Time for draw is: 40/55 minutes.
For line art 1 hour.
tommorow i finished coloured.
Comments/Critic?
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Re: The Hogake
great ideia dude
great ideia dude
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Re: The Hogake
i agree good idea
i agree good idea
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Good idea, looks good. Are you going to color it?
Good idea, looks good. Are you going to color it?
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I just noticed that you spelled it "hogake" on this and the other post you did here. It should be "hokage" right?
As for the lines, there seems to be some anatomy problems with the characters. The clothes don't seem to be on figured, but are kind of jellified in a way.
The second version you did has more potential with Naruto's face in the background, but why are Madara (I'm guessing that's Madara) and Orochimaru there as well? Going with the whole past-and-present Hokage theme, it makes sense to have Naruto there since that's his goal, but the other two don't fit since they were/are enemies of the village.
JMO, though.
As for the lines, there seems to be some anatomy problems with the characters. The clothes don't seem to be on figured, but are kind of jellified in a way.
The second version you did has more potential with Naruto's face in the background, but why are Madara (I'm guessing that's Madara) and Orochimaru there as well? Going with the whole past-and-present Hokage theme, it makes sense to have Naruto there since that's his goal, but the other two don't fit since they were/are enemies of the village.
JMO, though.