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    Help [JP] Shchelkunchik, several sentences in several chapters

    I need help with many lines, both in translation and reading flow: ------- - ハハハいいだろう! - なんのヘンテツもない。。。人間(クズ)どもがアアーッ - Hahaha, this is rich! - what a bunch of mediocre garbage you lot are! ------- - 魂と肉体の貢献ができるッ! - ハハハ尊敬とオ - 名誉を払ってエエ!! - You can offer you flesh and soul! -...
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    Done Furigana in another language and other issues

    We did actually look into the Russian name for the 5th, guessing that maybe the manga was using Russian as a fantasy lingua franca of sorts (the main character has a Russian name, the bad guys branded him with a cyrillic character, etc... note that it's a fantasy world and no one treats these...
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    Done Furigana in another language and other issues

    The problem with the German word is that, in a later chapter, a character mentions that the symphony's name sounds like another character's name - the main character, シェルクンチク = Shchel Kunchik (Russian for Nutcracker). Schicksals is missing a couple of sounds present in the furigana for fate, the...
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    Done Furigana in another language and other issues

    I'll have to confess I hadn't looked much further into the german possibility - since the second line didn't correspond to what I knew of german numbers, I immediately discarded the possibility out of hand. #5 in german would be "Nummer Funf", no Fank or anything like that... either that or...
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    Done Furigana in another language and other issues

    The manga I'm translating (Shchelkunchik) has a couple of russian and german words here and there, but these lines have furigana in a language I simply can't identify. I know german and it's not it; my friend studies russian and it doesn't seem to be that either. I've googled the katakana, but...
  6. Elanor Pam

    Done Assorted lines I need help with

    Thanks a lot! It helps a ton! :D
  7. Elanor Pam

    Done Assorted lines I need help with

    Here is the context for the first line - third pannel. And my new attempt: "For this delicate, teenage mermaid princess to be looked upon by her beloved..." Still doesn't help me with the meaning. :( Context: Somehow, "shamefully erotic" doesn't roll out of the tongue. XD;; A...
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    Done Assorted lines I need help with

    Some lines I'm having trouble with. 10代の輝くガラスの人魚姫を愛しいあの方に見ていただくの。。。 For this mermaid princess and her shining glass of ten generations to be looked upon by her beloved... (???) 青年誌編 Seinen shihen? What is this? でもあれからコルネット。。。 But since then Cornet has... 嘘みたいに人が変わって。。。...
  9. Elanor Pam

    Done Shchelkunchik, chapters 31 and 32

    Thanks for always, Unproductive :D how about the rephrasings below? Got rid of the quotation marks as you told me to. As for "バカヤローあー見えてシェルはオレを悩ます女豹なんだよおー あの唇の形を見るとわかる!"... well, if you know of a good translation for "オレを悩ます女豹", I think I can work the rest into something that makes sense...
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    Done Shchelkunchik, chapters 31 and 32

    Still clearing my backlog of translation questions. Chapter 31: Chapter 32
  11. Elanor Pam

    Done Shchelkunchik, chapter 29 and 30

    Thanks! You were the first to step in after a week.
  12. Elanor Pam

    Done Shchelkunchik, chapter 29 and 30

    Rather than post one thread for every chapter I translated, I decided to put all troublesome sentences in one file as I tried to clear my translating backlog. The file ended up bigger than I thought, so I'll still be posting more than one thread. Here goes the first batch. Chapter 29...
  13. Elanor Pam

    Done Shchelkunchik, chapter 33

    Thanks for the help! Are you going to check the last one, though?
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    Done Shchelkunchik, chapter 33

    Last part of my troublesome sentences backlog. Page 02, second pannel: Moreover, it came out that this week's village had over 1500 victims Page 03, 1st and 3rd pannels all their communications/news had been cut off Deception is not going to be effective in this time Page 04...
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    Done Shchelkunchik 27

    It's got to convey the meaning in the original without sounding unwieldly :Dd if you say it does, then I'll go with that!
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