I'm gathering your looking at the fantasy genre. To me your plot seems plain (sorry if it seems harsh) maybe if you kinda add a bit of mystery towards Edward or a secondary character. Maybe have a mysterious hooded man attack the blacksmith Edwards working for which is link to Edwards parents...
Hey guys,
I'm looking for a artist to join my team for a upcoming project. The story is posted on another thread and it's a passionate fueled project that I am looking forward to evolving.
I'm looking for talented or new amateur artist who can create amazing characters and environment...