Recent content by The Neutralizer

Sounds like a great plan! I am going to college soon for Japanese major and i love stories/writing. HMU

so a dark beginning I love it so far. Story i do not know where its going the introduction just did not feel as inviting to me(probably because it goes str8 into action) more story please. art needs to improve still but its good. (i am a writer so art is not my specialty)

Like the emotion so far but could still use improvement(paneling backround to). I know it is practice but i do not see where the story going. I get a idea you should go for gag,funny or battle stories. Like gintama or boobobobbob. Characters are easy but backround isnt i cant say for sure but...

Best of luck also great read and pics. post a link when your done wouldn't mind buying a copy. Support foreign friends ;). Sadly im just a writer would help :(

Yo whats rockin thomas here i am kinda new to this website and writing stories but i cannot pass up any genre or idea for that i have come to hone, practice and master my interesting ideas and story driven ability. So with that being said i am not asking much maybe just some pointers...

Re: Project: Hako-Bune interesting story plus good drawing! You can always take an idea from the greatest book of all time ;). My suggestion give the kid ability to speak to animals(DOG). Make the story a side scroller (megaman for instance) Where you see him constantly running figuring out...

Love the idea looking forward to seeing what else u do. Newb writer acknowledgement :verily

Best of luck. The first 4 links do not work can u repost them please. It is not easy but i bet you could find a full work or actual names from mangaka on this website. Someone this guy out also if there is anything i can do i would gladly..... need experience

Solid read i give you praise :). Remember manga has its detail in the art but having a manga were it portrays the thoughts and actions but not talking of the main character would further intrigue and interest the reader even younger ages. Make it a 3 part book series if not 2 my suggestion. may...

I am new to so i say Best of luck and practice makes perfect . Sadly i wish i could draw but i am to fascinated with stories to draw and half my time is put into it ;). Hopefully we could work together down the road. It would be cool to make a team of people like the people who make tsubasa...

Best of luck its not easy for just anyone to expand there stories in the beyond like u are doing..... Someone help this dood out ;) But because of the distortion humans got magical abilities and went to old weapons/tools for ways of living. Here we meet the main character a t mischievous 14 boy...

so u have a past problem of partners. Can u give me some insight or experience so i know what to avoid because im still new. By the way i am a writer too so help a brother out.

May i ask u what type of story are u looking into because i am still a beginner at story writing and i would prefer to make a duo for all the story ideas i got(trust me i can create). Also great attitude its not easy being humble ;). I would love to talk about this if not best of luck finding...