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[Raxehalf]

I came with many ideas to make a story. Maybe we can go pro.. lol. I'm working on fantasy, sci-fi, and mystery now.

Here's my sample story :

A weapon called Unite-67x created by unknown scientist for uncertain reason scatter in many countries. It causes dimension distortion. This chance is become an advantage for 'Blackshadow Dimension' to invade humans world. All of human's technology are reset like in the past, and nothing left. The technology were destroyed because the unbalance caused by Unite-67x to all wave in this world.. to be continued>>

What do you think?

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[The Neutralizer]

Best of luck its not easy for just anyone to expand there stories in the beyond like u are doing..... Someone help this dood out
But because of the distortion humans got magical abilities and went to old weapons/tools for ways of living. Here we meet the main character a t mischievous 14 boy causing a rokus but falls down a hole in town just to find a robotic suits of armor that is magical powered(requires a ton of magic to use). But thats not all he has to fight the BSD corporation. Technology vs magic(soul) What Will Win