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I think it's ruined. The only good part is the opening theme. Half of the fun of the series is in the fandom culture and they managed to strip away Yuri from that. :( Then there's the mismatched background music for some of the scene. :mad While they're trying to be really faithful to the...

No. It should be perfectly clear that they aren't. Rather there shouldn't be much of an indication that they are.

At first glance, if I had to say anything, the middle part with the news cast feels kind of off. As for the rest, it seems all right.

I'll be frank. I'm not all that interested in people contacting me here. If you want to say anything to me, it's better to go on irchighway and find me there. I'm nearly always idling. Instead, I'm going to take advantage of this opportunity to help along my elusive quest to find a really...

では1番から4番の方お越し下さい Now, numbers 1 through 4 please step forward. すごいご加護があるらしーわよ I heard she confers great protection! 日頃の行いがいいからな~ オレ達はよ This is for us being so nice to you normally. これは期待できるかな。。。？ Should I have any hopes for this one. この程度か。。。妖精武闘術には耐えられんな。。。 This is it...huh. I don't think...

Ughh... everyone copies the same exact synopsis out of a Mangacast review 2 years ago... Every time I read it, I want to hit myself with a wooden board.

rewrite >> and in the village of the most recent incident, there were over 1500 victims. rewrite >> We lost contact with every single member. fill in meaning from context >> The chance for ambush is already gone. minor >> The damage over these countries has been increasing. good...

Talking about herself?? All the other lines would also be about herself since there aren't any topic switches. It's hard to make sense of it that way, and it doesn't sound like she's talking about herself. I'd say that the conversation is mostly focused on other girl and the one time she...

hmm I took a look and got something markedly different. Lots of questions left unanswered by looking only at a single page. Teiichi: But… Teiichi: then, won't it happen again? (then = this way = if that is the case) Panel 2 Teiichi: Yoshizawa-san, you know, - what she needs is to be saved...

Ehh? Medicine box? I apologize. Serizawa is correct on all accounts. Besides overlooking that 面が割れる means to be conspicuous and known, I messed up some grammar, and should have looked at the raw for context. Sorry~

First part: Do they have ten pious disciples trying to leave them in the dust? Are they being dragged around hither and yon by ten pious disciples? The physical sense of the verb is correct on second reading. Say, where are the rest of our comrades hiding out? They're not exactly hiding. I...

Very nice actually. I didn't see anything critically wrong with bolded areas. The curse is a gap in the bends and distortions of the physical world... / Or the detritus...of creation's foundation. >>> If forced a rewrite here: I was a bit on the wordy side. The curse existeth in the gaps of...

開膛手 a murder, a claw-handed man, a knife wielding man; -- something like that 四處奔走 run around all over the place 而這正是你等待大限前所經歷的慘劇 This is exactly the tragedy that you will experience while your life runs out.

Re: Translation Grammar Question Hmmm, I don't get the problem. Here's what it says, right? Hong Kong, with the expiration of the 80 year lease to the British Commonwealth in the year 1997, returns to China.

It has this feeling: ------------------------- ---------------- Of note is the reordering of the girl's first two lines in the second speech panel.