337 last page my second try ! =P

[nigh7]

ok this is my second try coloring my first one sucked so bad =(
so here is the first
http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=018019fx5testcopyia5.jpg

And here is the new one i think i did a better job not realy good but someday i will get there =)

 

[NeoShweaty]

one thing i noticed is the inconsistant light source. Could the light shining on naruto's hand be the same as Yamato's? probably not. You did take some big leaps from the first pic though, so kudos

 

[nigh7]

yeah i know =( i forgot focus on the entire pic i made all one by one and forgot the armony =P


but will i suck on it one day i will make it right =P

 

[NeoShweaty]

also, this is something that is a btw, but sai's skin color is alot paler. Check out the volume covers thread somewhere in the naruto forum. You gave him a little too much blood

 

[Leen]

It's not too bad actually for an amateur. However, there are things which you can improve on. Shadings on the clothes can be improved. One general rule of thumb when you color using photoshop or any other software, don't be stingy with your shadings. More shadings, more color, more beautiful. Also, if you haven't notice it, those black areas can be deleted. It's best if you delete them and color them instead of leaving it there.