[346] - Sasuke and snake

taju_kage

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i hope your like ^^

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great great colors

a lot of the shadows dont really make a whole lot of sense though. if the light is coming from the right, why is the left side of his chest shaded.. unless his clothes dont cast shadows :/

also, im not really digging the shadows on his face, his bottom lip makes it look like he's stickin it out, which isnt really a sasuke-type expression

it's still a great SOLID piece of art, but like always there are some problems

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great !
 

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You really chose the right colours and created a nice atmosphere here! Love it:D

The cell shading could be improved a lot though. Like the shading on sasukes hair, or the vertical part of the snake. The snakes head would also be better with some more dark tones/contrast.

Anyway, nic3 atmosphere ;)
 

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thanks guys ^^
 

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very nice but there are some odd shadows other than that its all good :D
 

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I like the aura
 

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beautiful work.
so I think you should work more on the snake.

great job on this gay
=P
 

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Oh, that's a really old cover~! Btw, you did a great job! Keep it up!
 

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the palette is good, but i think the placement of shadows is off in several places. for one thing, you put a shadow on his collarbone which is sticking out and should be brighter. also, the clothes should be casting more shade over his chest and stomach. also, the snake should be casting shadow over sasuke. try to visualise how shadows would fall in reality. it can be hard to work with light coming from the sides, but try to keep it in mind! :thumbs
 

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really good!!
though the snake could be shaded a bit better^^
 

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Thanks guys :D
 

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Good coloring Taju_Kage, and I like the orange colored text to.
 

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thanks ^^
 
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