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[JMC]

Coment/Critic

401 page 17

http://img389.imageshack.us/my.php?image=401page17uj1.png its cool but i dont like

Cover 332

http://img530.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cover332dc4.png

I put the brush in the lines and I did not see it soo..the clothes of naruto are rare

i will try to fix it

 

[ToyBricks]

why there is a white line on his face?

 

[JMC]

is like a brightness xD

 

[alpvonkri]

Good job!!!

 

[Orochimaru]

nice

 

[Gaara_dono]

Loved it... Even if the sea in the 401 17th page isn't that great (feels a lil' flat ) maybe you chould vary more the colors add some drop effect and shadings!
And I like the two Naruto cover

Overall rating: 4.5 starz

 

[Kaith]

Very good work ^^

 

[JMC]

thank u man