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[hiruma63]

Here's a really old panel for you guys. Well it's my first coloring so don't blame me. Don't be nice, I expect to be stomped under ground and I need criticism/advices so don't be gentle and comment all you like. No tissues plz

http://hiruma63.deviantart.com/art/Sasuke-Mangekyou-131641592

 

[lee-nus]

wow, you actually attempted soft shading with your first try coloring? you got guts... XD
well, its way better than most first tries i've seen, it often takes artists many tries to get to that level, so keep your head high.
as for constructive crit, im sure you know sasuke isnt exactly tanned, so i would make his skin less saturated and a lot brighter.
also, i think his mouth could use a little more defining, and i think there should be more shadow below his nose. and finally, work a little bit more on the hair, and you will improve this image a lot! good job!

 

[madaramaster]

just as lee-nus had said you got guts to try soft shading as your first coloring, and the skin is too dark too tan but for it being your first time its good

 

[- aMt -]

cool pic, but i dont like the skin's tone'

 

[Jaime F.]

Sasuke's skin's looks to orange, but I like how you colored this mangekyou sharingan.

 

[hiruma63]

I started with soft shading for one simple reason. Cell shading seemed too easy and not complex enough for me..

 

[Googlez_kun]

yeah your right!
cellshading is too easy!
softshading ftw!!
anyway
i have to agree with lee-nus
good first try!