[406] Cover Shikamaru

wesolek

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witamy, nowy polak na mh :D a jesli chodzi o pracke, to jest to twoja pierwsza? najlepsza nie jest, lineart bardzo kiepski, malo cieni i sporo niedopracowanych rzeczy, i tlo jakie by sie przydalo... aha i czemu logo naruto jest niebieskie???
 

VASSiLi

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nice
 

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rox ^^
 

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Looks great. :)
 

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Jedna z 1, napis jest iebieski, bo fajnie wyglada

thanks a lot
 

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Great coloring. :D
 

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Looks good. Keep up the good work.
 

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I'm sorry but your page doesn't really look good according to me!

1.It isn't even based correct: There are still some white spots and other colors (that shoulsn't be there)
2.Color the hair! Not just such a dark gray straight part :/
3.Your shading need to be more precise (Maybe learn how to use the pen-tool <3)
4.Go and try some tutorials

5.Keep it up! I#m sure you can do better with some trainig


Oh and sorry for the harsh criticism <333
 
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